Their Backs

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoughEyes, Jun 24, 2011.

  1. That sickening wave
    It surrounds her, pooling at her bare feet
    Her mind is spinning fluidly as it rises
    The water clasps her legs, sprouting anomalies
    called hands
    Memories rush through her
    Their backs, their backs
    They never once look back

    That familiar feeling, that putrid familiar taste--
    melancholia engulfs her senses

    The water is at her waist,
    gnawing endlessly
    The water is livid
    Enraged
    Anxious
    Ravenous
    It bears its heart on its sleeve, showing those
    disgusting dreary memories
    Those memories that should be sealed
    Those memories that must not be revealed
     
  2. Eyes that once held vigor are overtaken
    Determination has deteriorated
    Sense of self has withered
    Who is this self that is here?
    Who is the self that is near?

    Their backs, their backs
    Those backs that bear strong shoulders
    Those backs that hold elegance
    Those backs, those backs
    Why won't they look back?

    A forced reaction to obtain air
    A forced reaction to keep the game fair
    The air is stagnant with chagrin
    Her eyes are bewitched, vexed
    by those coy crest-fallen whispers
    Those whispers that behold those painful memories
    Those whispers that sing in the silence,
    screaming the truth

    Her lips tremble as a solitary tear escape
    her vexed eyes
    She has broken once again
    The pieces she was putting back together
    have shattered, falling away from her once again
    Her pale hands tremble, her long elegant fingers
    curl inwards
     
  3. A drop
    A crimson drop intertwining with
    aquatic blue
    That deadly blue that haunts her every dream
    The deadly blue that makes her want to scream
    And their backs, their backs
    They never once have looked back

    Her breath is rapacious
    Her eyes are dazed
    Where is the self that was once there?
    Where is the self that belonged to her?
    Where is the true self?

    Her last gasp of air, the anomalies
    bring her under the blue
    She closes her eyes and wishes it were true
    The water surrounds her, the whispers rushing to her
    She doesn't know what is real
    She doesn't know what to feel
    Is any of this......
    Even real?

    Deeper
    She falls deeper
    That blue hue, that dangerous blue hue
    She lets herself be carried away
    Not bothering to stay awake
    Because she sees, her broken eyes see

    Their backs, their backs
    Residing backs is all she sees
    She tries to avert her eyes and let herself be
    Why can't she ever be free?
    Their backs, their backs
    Those answers are on their backs
    That forbidden fruit is haphazardly hanging and yet...

    Their backs is all she can see.
     
  4. Well done sweetheart. Very well written and good emotion. Yosh!  Rose-