the willow tree

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Jul 8, 2011.

  1. What do you suggest we do,Lucinda?!?!? Shouted my dad Calum.
    My mother,Lucinda was crying. They were having a fight in front of my face. I ran to my room, packed my bag climbed out my window and ran.

    Prologue: my name is jack. I'm sixteen. I've always hates fights an I'm majorly sensitive.
     
  2. I ran into the forest hoping I wont get eaten.

    Chapter one
    "hello?" I asked. "who is there?" asked and unfamiliar voice. "jack...." said the voice and came to reveal his true self.
     
  3. I walked to him."who are you?" I asked. "Matt" he replied. We traveled the forest until we heard the rustling sound...
     
  4. I pulled out my survival knife and moved the bush. I saw a face, grabbed the body and held my knife to his throat. Matt stared at me,stunned.
     
  5. "who are you?!?!" I roared. "David, my name is David!" Matt gave me the look and I stared back mouthing: get the rope.
     
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  7. I tied David to a chair." so your David?" I asked. "yea and?" he said back. " Matt,know any davids?" "nope" he answered. I paced back and fourth. " what are you doing in the forest?" I asked." pondering for a new life.""what are you doing here?" he asked after his own answer" I'm looking for a village of peace" I said
     
  8. I guess I got a little too close to David and he kissed me. I walked to get Matt.
     
  9. "Matt,go watch David,NOW!" he hurried out of the tent.

    Chapter two
    I woke up to Matt patting my head. I sat up and asked" is David asleep?" " nah I just woke him up not to ling ago." I got up and started to tie my shoes. I got up and threw dome fish at David as I walked out if the tent." thanks." he said. I walked off without saying your welcome. He was following me. I turned around and threw a kick.
     
  10. "WTF do you want?!" I screamed. "I'm trying to help you...gosh." he answered in a hurt voice. I stopped walking. He bumped into me."ow..." he said "shhh!" I growled. "listen.." I said. I walked behind a tree and found a girl. A familiar face at that I recognized. Sarah....
     
  11. "Sarah?" I asked. She looked up.it had been since first grade I had seen her. I smiled and she stood up and gave her a hug. "come on, I'll take you to my campsite." we walked back an I suddenly remembered. They walked ahead of me and got to the campsite after I told them I needed to pick berries. As I was picking some blueberries I heard a ghostly voice"Jack....Jack..." it repeated itself over and over. A figure appeared before me.
     
  12. "who are you? Where are you?" I asked. "I am Sophie, I am the ghost of this forest." but shouldn't you be lurking the forest but not stalking me?" I rose off the ground. I did not change my clothes but a skirt was what I was wearing with the shirt I wore yesterday. "put me down!!!" I roared. "as you wish." she said and she dropped me. I landed on my stomach and my nose was bleeding. I arose and wiped the blood. I started to limp back to the camp. She was following me. You could hear her panting behind me. I got back to camp." Jack, are you okay?" asked Matt."I was crying. He held me in his arms.
    I turned around seeing sophie, the spirit. After all had went to bed, I sat by the fire. "hello..." said sophie."what do you want?" I said angrily."well ghosts dont hurt people to hurt, it's just our souls are broken." she explained. I fell into a deep sleep...
     
  13. I luv this story
     
  14. Thank you. Tell all to read :3
     
  15. I woke up to David being yelled at by Matt and Sarah sitting by me. "what the hell is going on?"I asked. Sophies soft voice answered me" david was killing squirrels." Sarah was going to cry. She loves squirrels.I pat sarahs back and standing up to go slap somebody. I stood in-between the two and told them both"" Chill out or I'll throw you guys into the river." I trotted to the river to swim.I was trying to tie the top. I felt warm hands tying my bathing suit. I turned around to see who it was. I spun around and saw it was Matt. I ran to the river and jumped in. He followed me in to the deep sapphire water...
     
  16. I bobbed up and swam close to him. I put my arms around his neck and kissed him. I heard sophies voice" Romeo,juliet, let's go." she said and her body disappeared.
     
  17. I swam out and ran. Later I cooked some potstickers for everybody. After that everybody went to bed. When I woke up the next morning I found I fell asleep next to Matt. I woke up and ate some cheese.
     
  18. Everybody woke up and gave them some health bars and we packed up and walked. I found a pair( brother and sister) Billy and Elly. They were adorable. We took them a long and I gave Sarah the duty to take care of them. We stopped by a lake and set up camp there.