Okay so if there is anything wrong with this, my little cousin wrote it for me but I gave the ideas and things so... Constructive critisicim sure but don't go overboard please. I should probably upload a paragraph per day/week?.... Depends if I'm busy or not... ___________________________________________________ Part One: A week before Halloween, I found out that my family and I were moving out in four days. Not just moving house but moving town aswell! It's a major change from the city to the country. I wasn't worried at all but my little sister was really worried about the move. She's only ten years old. Aww the poor little thing was crying her eyes out. I'm five years older than her so I decided to put a brave face on just for her. Sure, I'll miss my friends, sure I'll miss being in the city, sure I'll miss my room, I designed it myself! But I'm trying to stay brave just for Aquamarine.i decided to snap myself out of these horrid thoughts so I went to the bathroom and turned on the cold water, I put my hands under it and splashed some freezing cold water onto my tanned face. _________________________________________________ This will have a crush in it and that's all the romance really, it's more of a sort of horror, thanks for reading, I'll update soon,.....
Heyho.... UPDATION on page two haha. ___________________________________________________________________ Part Two: We have almost finished packing up now and it's two days to the move. Aqua is now really excited. I guess I am kind of excited but I'm definitely NOT showing it because now I wanted to stay. I wish we could stay because I'm starting to worry that I'll miss my girl-friends, guy-friends and best-friends too much. Mostly my best friends though. I tie my long mid-back length hair up into a messy bun then start to pack my personal things away. As I get to pack away hidden things, I start to get watery eyes because I found this box titled Alyson. All the memories come flushing back. My sister was secretly outside. "It's alright Serina. You'll enjoy the move." She said with a soft smile as she hugs me tightly. Aqua looks at the photos and knows why I am crying. It was a photo of my absolute best friend, Alyson. She got stalked. The stalker decided to upload photos and information and secrets and such onto all social networks just to upset her. She got bullied for it. There was too much stress, sadness and things being revealed that she ended up committing suicide. It made mainly me, heartbroken. I never told anyone this, but Aqua; whenever I go out alone, I always search for clues about the stalker. If (s)he is still alive.... Probably is, it was only three years ago. I actually locked myself in my room for three weeks because I was so upset. Obviously I came out for food/drink or the toilet or a shower. Aqua being a little darling decided to help me pack away. Two days until the moving day and three days until Halloween......... ___________________________________________________________________ Hope you all like this, bumps and such?, criticism but not too harsh please:/
Come on people..... Read D: ____________________________________________________________ Part 3: Here it is... The dreaded moving day. I was told to dress in my nicest clothes but instead just to irritate them, I wanted a new look so I put on a lip ring, scaffolding ear piercing, black lipstick, eyeliner, long black ripped at the back skull top with long sleeve holes and an under band top, a black miniskirt with chains across the pockets, ripped fishnets and finally black Doc Martins boots. Kinda gothic look. To frighten the villagers from Pembroshire (almost) and irritate my parents. I went downstairs and we went in the car as silent as a mouse. The whole journey was quiet except for my rock music and the dim noise of the car radio. It seemed as if the journey was forever! We finally arrived in Pembroshire. The car stopped at a halt in the driveway of a gigantic brick house. Mainly all the villagers were in the street, walking or chatting or lounging/doing things in their front garden. All of the houses here are huge! I couldn't believe how big they were. Much bigger and fancier than the ones in the city. As I was still in the car, I applied a last coat of black make up to make their reactions to me even more priceless. I made sure everything was my definition of "perfect". I slowly opened the door and put out my fishnetted legs and Doc Martins first then looked around casually and stepped out fully. Hardly anyone reacted to me only really this one boy who was also wearing a lot of black. His jaw dropped straight to his feet. I guess I made a new friend? I walked over to him and said “Hey... What's your name? Mines is Serina..” I can't believe I actually blushed at seeing him shirtless. I mean I have seen a lot of guys shirtless and mowing the grass... Just like he was doing. “Spike. My names Spike. Nice to meet you Serina!” He said in an English accent with a cheeky grin. “Oh my days.... He's ENGLISH” I scream inside my thoughts. “Did you move here or visiting family? Where are you staying?” “Number forty-two” I said pointing across the street. He gave me a friendly hug and I went back over to my house and thought "I'm starting to like this place now..." I go inside and start unpacking my things then go exploring. I found a tall hill and started to climb it. I got to the top.... Eventually... To find Spike... Shirtless... Again... “Spike?...” I spoke out, I always seem to get shaky whenever I see him shirtless... “Oh... Serina...! Welcome to "Casa De Spike"... It's got the best view!” He whispered steadily. “Lay on your back and see, it's really comfy too!” I lay on my back and seen the most amazing view of stars. I ended up falling asleep. ____________________________________________________________
Good job ally! Still great so far! Make sure to keep reminding me when you update and ill continue reading every time