The Supernaturals by Aziz

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Azizosis (01), Jun 25, 2011.

  1. Prologue
    It was a cold Friday. We had waited for a special day like today to move to the other side of the mountain. Some people ran around the mountain, some people went through the mountain, the rest of us went over the mountain. Hoping to meet.

    Poem
    As Winter went on
    We moved over the mountain
    As we sang a song


    Chapter 1
    "Don't leave us Azi, we need you." cried my family. "We don't care if you have powers."
    "I have to go, the government is looking for me." said Azi. Azi then left his parents. He searched the whole city, touching every superhero comic book just to get his powers. He found a group of people just like him, with different supernatural abilities of course. There was Sophie, Ryan, Rebecca, Danny, Dittle and Rose. They knew there was more people left. So they set on a journey to find them. All Azi could see was darkness, pure darkness. So he quickly got out a comic an touched the photo of the Green Lantern, instantly making him alight. They all got out their blankets and sleeping bags and lied down. It has been a busy day and they needed to quickly find a way over the mountain.It had to be by this Friday! Did I mention that the day today is Thursday and the mountain is 13000 ft tall?
    Everyone knew that they had to get out of the city. So we made a secret tunnel way after we got over the mountain. As we talked about it while in our sleeping bags we decided to sleep to regenerate our powers.
    Friday came and we spent the day packing our bags and controlling our powers. We achieved it all. All we had to do was wait until Friday night.
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    This took me a while so please try and be nice about it. Also post if you want to be in the next chapter. I will reveal the superpowers in the next chapter.

    -Aziz-
     
  2. Ooooh, can I be in?
     
  3. Sure. Just post your power. What you want to be called and your personality.
     
  4. Sounds good, if I had to give advice I'd say try to work on the structure a bit more so it's a smoother read but I like it. Can I be in?

    Name: Fletch
    Description:

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    He also has one black wing that sprouts from his right shoulder blade when he fights or needs to fly
    Personality: Anti-social, selfish and rude but if his friends were in need of help, he would help
    Powers: Controls fire, can shoot black razor sharp feathers out of his wing that a covered in a dark aura. He can also fly and is an amazing swordsman.
     
  5. Sounds spectacular may i be in it ? Can somebody with photobucket , i'll see if i can get it .

    Jennifer
    18
    Blondie hair blue eyes
    Never talks back to the authorities always takes tardys with out questioning
     
  6. Um mines a shape shifter....any shape she can dream up.
     
  7. Colleen...usually called Collie or Coll
    Shy, loyal, stubborn, can be outgoing when I feel like it, insomniac
    Superspeed to make running that much more fun
     
  8. Her power is well telekinese
     
  9. She is nice , Caring , strong and doesnt like when people pick fights on her. I drew this picture not kidding its not of her but is is something I drew. If u have photobucket , check out Spottedstar2012 , thats me .

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  10. Chapter 2
    Hut 2, 3, 4, Hut 2, 3, 4, Hut! We all climbed up the mountain. Danny helped us with his super speed. So we got to the other side in 3 minutes. Sophie and Ryan decided to fly over the mountain. We all met at the same spot. Then we decided to search for some more mutated people. We found 4 more people. So we stopped searching after that. Their names are Fletch, Jennifer, Qin and Colleen. Each one of them had a power. The team then decided to get to our secret HQ. Fletch showed us his deadly wings. Then he controlled fire for us. Jennifer moved objects in the room around with her Telekinesis. Qin could shapeshift! Colleen picked up the whole house with her amazing super strength. Then it was our turn. Sophie gave everyone a feather, this granted everyone one wish. Ryan made metal bend and crinkle. Rebecca told everyone she had the Kiss Of Death. Dittle turned into a little plush toy and Rose shot deadly roses at a mailman. It was my turn. I got out a comic book and touched it. Instantly I turned into SpiderMan. Everyone looked at me in amazement. For the next month or so we practiced controlling our powers. By the end of it everyone could control in easily. Then the government came. They teamed up with evil supernatural people. Then they asked everyone to join them. Jennifer went on their side. What was worse is that she can use her Telekinesis on us. It was a long month. So we went out for dinner. After that we just wanted to sleep. It took 1 hour of talking for us to get bored and doze off.

    -Aziz-
     
  11. This is Dittle as a plush toy. I drew it myself.

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  12. This is the rest of the crew.
     
  13. This is the rest of the crew
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  14. Thank You. I know I suck at them.
     
  15. Amy
    Emo(true)
    Wears black knee high sneakers
    A harle
     
  16. Quinn costume, and has amber eyes black hair. I'm a girl that can basically destroy things w/fire.
     
  17. Sorry MORDICI. There will be no more characters. These are the final characters.
     
  18. Sophie , is this basically what your character looks like i couldnt find a match but at least this picture has wings.

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  19. Like the green hair it well yea its intresting