The story of Frizan Lokia

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Liona_Haize (01), Jul 18, 2012.

  1. This is my first fictional story,hope you enjoy ps this is a journal fiction
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    France
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    Hi i am Frizan Lokia and i am currently boarding the S.S Requia to travel to Venezuela,we took a long carriage ride from Paris we are going to trek through unforgiving storms,the ship might not make it through
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    Please bump,remember my very first story
     
    #1 *Liona_Haize (01), Jul 18, 2012
  2. Bump
     
    #2 iShawn-MrStealYoGirl, Jul 18, 2012
  3. Bump!
     
    #3 *Charlie-Bush (01), Jul 18, 2012
  4. Thx,4more and I will continue remember I am not forcing you all to bump,though it would be much appreciated
     
    #4 *Liona_Haize (01), Jul 18, 2012
  5. Max Bro don't do 4 more start of with a lower number then go higher
     
    #5 iShawn-MrStealYoGirl, Jul 18, 2012
  6. Then 2 more bumps?
     
    #6 *Liona_Haize (01), Jul 18, 2012
  7. No just do it now cus ur story is going down on the list
     
    #7 iShawn-MrStealYoGirl, Jul 18, 2012
  8. Day 2
    We have set sail for Venezuela from France and I see a bad storm up ahead hope it's not too bad...
     
    #8 *Liona_Haize (01), Jul 18, 2012
  9. I'm not connected to the story... YET! It is not very descriptive, I don't know much about your character and the updates should be LONGER! I will keep reading and well done... Bump!
     
    #9 *izzy_wizzy (01), Jul 18, 2012
  10. Bump
     
    #10 FallenAngel12321, Aug 3, 2012
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