the saviour

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by deadlysweet, Aug 24, 2013.

  1. once upon a time in the middle of the sea there was a young man as lost as can be

    he has been sailing for days without sight of land untill one fateful morning he woke up in sand

    he crashed on an island as beautiful as could be with no sight of any living thing as far as he could see

    he gets up and walks towards a tree when lo and behold an angel he did see

    the angel walks towards him with a beauty that shun and with eyes that burned like the glowing sun

    she towerd over the lad with a voice like Thunder and says "do you know why we spared you youngster "

    the boy looks at the angel quaking in fear and replys in a small voice becouse God sent me here?

    The angels laugh sounded like a thousand bells ringing "nay my child it is because he is forgiving

    the boy looks up confusion in his eyes 'what have done wrong oh angel of the skys

    the angel spreads her wings long and wide and in the glimmer of the feathers he catches a sign

    in her wings he see a girl with eyes that have seen too much of the world

    she cries and cries her heart torn asunder while lighting strikes with a flash and thunder

    The boy looks on in amazement. eyes deep and clear as the young maidens sadness strikes him with fear

    The maiden look up tears in her eyes and see a frightful sight that turns them to ice

    The boy see a man with eyes a blazing fire he holds before her shackles made of cold wrought iorn

    The maiden cries because she know what lays ahead but she gets up.with no fight instead

    The boy cries in dissmay as the man takes the young girl out a back way

    What will happen to her? The young boy asks the angel of the sky the angel replies bluntly "she will be tried "

    The boy cries with his head in his hands while the angel looks at him crying in the sands

    The boy replies through in a voice quaking in fear" what can I do to help her? "he volunteers

    The angel looks down a smile on her face" nothing can save her nothing in the human race "

    The boy looks up confused in his grief "then why show me this "he says through his teeth

    The angel replies "because it is your calling to bring joy and happiness to all of the falling "

    The boy looks up determined set in his face "yes Angel I shall save the human race "

    The angel smiles and a bright light flashes and the boy finds himself alone in a meadow of grasses

    The boy looks around wondering if it was all just a dream but then looks down and gasps at what he sees

    He sees the shackles the one in his sign and he knew that it was the maiden the came to his side

    Before he sets off the boy pauses and waits and buries the shackles in the ground to wait

    He walk to the east in search of the falling because he now knows that this is his calling.
     
  2. Is this a story or a poem? Or both… It's not bad, there are just some spelling/grammar mistakes.