The Robertson's

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NinjaJosh, Jan 15, 2012.

  1. The knife entered her leg again "WHERE IS IT" a dark gloomy man stood towering over her "I'm not saying" she whimpered regretting what she just said, "YOU ARE NO USE THEN!" the man plunged the knife in to her heart...

    To be continued...
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  2. Great start bro!  Bump!
     
  3. Thanks Sis
     
  4. BUMP


    GOOD JOB DUDE
     
  5. The two sisters were deep in conversation on there way home from school. There names where Lily and Hannah Robertson, Hannah pulled out here key to undo the door, she unlocked it knowing something's not right Lily walked in first she screamed and fell to the floor, Hannah jumped over lily to the dead body that was there Mum... She had a knife through her heart and blood was every where, the question is who done this?...
     
  6. Ok I will do after a phew people have read 
     
  7. CON.TIN.UE. 
     
  8. I'll update it after school
     
  9. Love you more  and I need ideas for the next part like what could happen a court scene or some thing
     
  10. Hannah still staring at mum tears in her eyes "what's that" bends down and picks up note it says

    Dear Lily and Hannah
    I'm sorry I killed your mum I had to if you would like to see your Uncle Kris and Auntie Angie again meet me at the park at 7pm don't be late
    From the murderer

    Hannah gave lily the letter "Read it sis read it!" she whimpered.
    Lily reads letter "were going to meat this murderer I'm not loosing my aunt and unc!" she said with tears rolling down her cheek...
     
  11. Any more ideas I thank the last person for there Idea 
     
  12. The girls walked to the park and site another there Uncle Kris And Auntie Angie where there but by them selves. "Hannah lily go away it's a trick" Kris mouthed. Before they could do a thing a van reversed and grabbed the four of them. "It's time I reunited you lot with your mother!" the man laughed and slammed the doors, the van went off at top speed...
     
  13. *and sure enough
     
  14. Bumpooooo.
     
  15. comment please