The Pops Rock

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *dangbro (01), Jun 11, 2011.

  1. Chapter 1
    " Ahm" I said as I walked in to my science class. " you are in my seat. "
    "well that to bad, ain't it. "the dude said as he turned around. Oh man i thought. As he had spoken and turned around I had saw that that was my boyfriend Jeff!
    I am Kay Turna. I'm 1 of the most popular peaple in my school. I'm in 11th grade and hang out with seniors sometimes. I'm usually not snobby to girls,just boys for some reason. I have beach blond hair which falls nicely on my big,full chest.my eyes are blue. That day i was wearing a short skirt (with no tights), flip flops, and a tube top(lime green,of course).
    I sat down on Jeffs lap, since he refused to move. Big mistake!
     
  2. A lot of spelling and grammatical errors. Seems like an okay story but I have to read more to really get the whole stuck up, overly confident pretty girl character.
     
  3. Chapter 2
    He grabbed my chest and squeezed. I jumped of his lap and tipped the chair. Then I sat on it, leaving him no choice but to go to a different desk.
    Class flew by in a blur. I was trying to think of a way to break up with him. I finally thought of a great way. I skipped all the way to lunch. Jeff was gonna wish he hadn't done that.
    ****************lunch*********************
    My heart was racing as I made my way over to a empty lunch table with my clique following close behind me.


    I NEED CHARACTERS FOR THE CLIQUE MEMBERS!
     
  4. I'll be a character. I need a new story to follow.
     
  5. Yo I'll be in as a clique member! Make me as an overly happy kid lol with spiked black hair and blue streaks xD
     
  6. Oh and I'm a ninja. A happy ninja :D
     
  7. I wanna look like how I already look lol. I'm sure you can get a pretty good idea of what I'm like through my writing and how I've behaved and spoken in forums.
     
  8. I dunno bout me though....I'll go with a different description this time.

    Name: Danny
    Description: Dark brown eyes, short, tan, skinny, basketball shorts, black t-shirt, flip flops
    Personality: Happy-go-lucky, different, serious when needed
     
  9. I'll be a clique member.

    Name: Vivi Huynh
    Grade: 11
    Hair: Lush, black, thick, wavy hair
    Eyes: PURE BLACK, cold
    Skin: really really pale for an Asian girl
    Other: great body, tall-ish, has a style everyone likes too
    Personality: is unique, very intelligent, gets straight A's but is the kind of girl people don't call a nerd, very sporty, thinks before she says, flirty but not slûtty
    Boyfriend? not yet.
     
  10. Damn only flirty?
     
  11. Gabby
    Kind of short, pushover girl but she's sweet and good with advice, a bit spacey, isn't very good with boys and stumbles quite a bit
    dark brown hair and liquid green eyes, glasses, quirky smile, pink and blue t-shirt, black Bermuda shorts and Nike running shoes
    Fit body and a natural tan
     
  12. Mister eagle

    Hight: 7ft


    Clothes:
    •Silk suit
    •black tie
    •Gold watch
    •diamond ring
    •Top coat
    • top hat
    •Black shades
    • white gloves

    Personality:
    •sneaky
    •sly
    •Charming
    •esthetics
    •cunning

    Looks: tanned
    Fit
    Long hair
    Blue eyes
    Brown hair

    likes: little feet

    Hates big feet

    Bio: born into into a family of farmers. who died in the badger famine. Seeing as there where no more badgers to farm he moved to the city. Where he became a lawyer.
     
  13. *Calum crassweller

    Hight: 5'4


    Clothes:
    •Silk suit
    •black tie
    •Gold watch
    •diamond ring
    •Top coat
    • top hat
    •Black shades
    • white gloves

    Personality:
    •smart
    •kind
    •Charming
    •esthetics
    •cunning

    Looks: tanned
    Fit
    Long hair
    Blue eyes
    Brown hair

    likes: little feet

    Hates big feet
     
  14. I don't need any more characters. Thanks
     
  15. Chapter 3
    I climbed on to the table. My friends,AKA the clique members, climbed on to the chairs. My heart had never beaten so fast. I knew that I was letting my confidence take over me. That happens alot. To much. All the memories came flooding back. I pushed them away, for the reason being that they are to horrible. I pulled my confidence back. This was not the time for my flash back.
    I cleared my throat. When that didn't quiet down the cafeteria, I let out a blood curdelling scream. That got there attention. I once again cleared my throat. I said "today I broke up with Jeff. Why u may ask?" I told them the story. I was sure that at least ten people wood have called jeff a jerk. I was satisfied.
     
  16. .... Cause he sat in your seat? 
     
  17. Chapter 4
    After school, my friends gathered in my living room to talk about how we were going to decorate the gym for prom. We were on planning comity. Now would be a good time to tell u about my friends. Here r their descriptions:
    Rosa- Happy, non snobby, blond hair, blue eyes.
    Danny- happy, funny, non snobby, short, brown hair.
    Gabby- short, sweet, gives good advice, not good with guys, 1 of my 2 bffs, non snobby.
    Lynn- Happy, non Snobby, sensitive to other peoples feelings, my other bffs.
    My friends and I didn't get much done that day. We were to busy talking about what I had done to Jeff.
     
  18. Chapter 5
    Iwent to my window to watch my friends go, I thought about THE SNOBS. THE SNOBS are a nother pop group at my school. They are very snotty! These are who they are:
    Eagle- Black hair, tall , dresses fancy.
    Charlie: flirty, 's foot ball, brown hair.
    Alli: Popular, where's to much make up, my ex BFF , the head of THE SNOBS.
    Vivi: wavy black hair,smart, Allies side kick.
    I had had a long night, so after dinner and my homework, I hit the sack.
     
  19. Charlie202, you rock for being a fan! Please tell others! Sorry about chapter 5 being short! I needed to introduce the rest of the characters. By the way, this story will not get any more dirty then it is now!