The perfection wars

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by kittehwars, Jan 19, 2012.

  1. This will be a story about a struggle between two armies:
    -The perfectionists
    And
    -The renegade

    The perfectionist army is eliminating all that is considered "imperfect" by their standards. Rules have been set for their citizens on how to be perfect, all others are killed.

    The Renegade is a guerilla fighting group against the perfectionists, who are quickly taking over the world with weapons and ideals. Anyone who escapes a perfectionist city will often seek out the renegade for help and protection.

    So what do you think? No worries, the story will be much more developed as I think It through.
     
  2. I think it's good, maybe over a city? I call a spot! In regenades!
     
  3. The story will begin tonight with my usual prologue speech
     
  4. Sorry for this delay, but I'm writing the prologue on Sunday instead.