The Past Life...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Miss_Sugababy, Sep 13, 2011.

  1. Hey guys this is a story im starting its completely random n i have no idea where its headed but i hope ull like it!

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    "If I died, would you die with me?" Princess Emily asked.
    "You know I would, my Princess. I'd take my own life for you if I had to. There's nothing I wouldn't do for you. I love you and always will, for ever and always."
    As soon as he said these words, Jane awoke from her dream. She wondered why she was dreaming the same dream over and over again, every night, just to hear his sweet, sweet voice say the same words and then wake up. Of course it had to mean something, she just couldn't figure out what.

    Jane got up earlier than usual on Monday morning. She had had trouble sleeping the night before and decided that after she woke up for the last time, she wouldn't be able to get back to sleep. She got a shower and then went to the kitchen do get some cereal. Her parents weren't up yet but her older sister and brother were. They didn't even acknowledge that Jane was there, which wasn't that strange, just a bit annoying. She said good morning to them but it was as if she were talking to a brick wall. Weird, she thought. Oh well, I'll just have to see what school's like today.

    As soon as she got to school, things were much different than this morning at home. All everyone could do was stare at her like she was some freak from the moon. She got to her locker eventually, even if she did it a little uncomfortably. "Yep," she whispered to herself. "Things are gonna be awkward today!"
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    Alright thats it for now let me know what ya think! Thanks!
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  2. I think it's pretty good! Add more if ya please
     
  3. K I'll post in a minute
     
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    On the way to her first class, Jane saw something. She could've sworn that she had seen a man dressed like he was from ancient times, but as soon as she looked again, he was gone.
    During Human Bio, she saw him again, only this time, he was motioning for her to come to him.
    She was still as a statue for about two minutes while she thought about what to do. When she had decided she would go and see what the stranger wanted, she got up and walked straight out of the room. Everyone watched gobsmacked as she did, because only idiots would walk out of class without permission.
    Her teacher shouted after her, but all Jane could do was ignore him.

    After walking out she reached the stranger and she started asking a lot of questions. In reply, he touched her head and made her unconscious.
    When she woke up, her vision was blurry and the room she was in smelt strongly of cinnamon.
    Eventually her sight cleared and she could properly take a look at her surroundings. There was a small fire in one corner and in another sat a woman covered from head to toe in a black robe.
    When the woman realized that Jane was looking at her, she got up and took the robe off to reveal herself. Jane couldn't believe her eyes. It was the princess from her dreams!
    "Hello," the princess started. "Hello Jane Gabrielle of the year 2011 AD. I am Princess Emily of Eliteraw. You are probably wondering why you have been dreaming of me and my lover. The truth is, we are in danger of being separated for the rest of eternity and I need your help, and your help only."
    "But why me, Your Highness?" Jane asked. "What is so special about me?"
    "Ah, what isn't special about you?" Emily replied. "I am you Jane Gabrielle. You in one of your past lives. And I need you to help my love and I to stay together forever. Please Jane Gabrielle, I beg you."
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    Ok let me know if I should continue or not I don't wanna waste space in forums 
     
  5. Ah stuff it im writing more before i forget it lol

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    When Emily had left Jane alone, she went to go and see her soul-mate.
    "How did it go, my love? Did she say she would help us?" Sebastian asked.
    "She said she would think about it, my sweet. She's having trouble accepting all this. She reminds me of myself a few years ago, young and confused. But don't worry," Emily said calmly. "If I know myself, I am almost positive that she will help." With that, Sebastian pulled her into a tight embrace.
    "Whatever happens," he whispered in Emily's ear. "If we are to be separated, you must know that I will go to the ends of the Earth to be reunited with you once again." And then, he kissed her passionately.

    Jane was finding it hard to process everything. She had just met herself, well her 'past self', and she felt so alone in this strange time. She had not met anyone except for Emily, and she needed her best friend more than ever.
    She wanted to tell her about everything, how she was supposed to help Emily stay with her lover, how now when she really focused, she realized she looked every bit like the princess, with her gorgeous blue-black hair, her milk chocolate coloured skin, her high cheekbones, her perfect eyes, her beautiful lips, and everything else. The only difference about them was the slight age gap and the clothes that they wore. Other than that, they were completely identical.

    Jane missed her family, missed her love, missed her world, but she was unsure whether she would ever see all that she missed ever again. She was scared, and all she wanted, all she needed, was a hug.
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    Ok now let me know what i should do 
     
  6. Ok will do tomorrow 
     
  7. It's awesome
     
  8. Ok the next part...

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    Back in the year 2011, everyone was talking about the mysterious disappearance of Jane Gabrielle. One minute she was walking outside of class, then the next she fell unconscious for no apparent reason and just vanished into thin air. Her friends and family were worried about her, and her boyfriend, Tucker, was heartbroken. He realized now for the first time that he truly loved Jane, and he wished that he had had the chance to say it before she disappeared. He was determined to find his girl, whatever the consequences, because he would not, could not, go on without her.

    The King of Eliteraw was worried about his daughter, for illness had taken over her body. The doctor had said it wasn't serious, but the King wasn't so sure.
    "My Lord," the Queen had addressed him. "I have brought news about Emily. It seems she is not ill, but pregnant. I have feelings that it is Sir Sebastian of Wickerole's child that she carries. I ask that you give her your blessing, for this is a great honour to both kingdoms."
    "A blessing..." the King responded. "Of course I shall give her my blessing! They are to be wed as soon as possible, and all the people in the Kingdom are able to attend. But tell my daughter that she must not invite that friend of hers, I believe the name is Jane Gabrielle, for I have my doubts about that girl..."
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    Im sorry if it makes no sense atm im a bit tired
     
  9. Thank u  i read a story of urs n i thought it was awesome 
     
  10. Ok im gonna write some more now

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    When Jane saw Sebastian for the first time after the Princess became pregnant, she almost fainted. He looked exactly like Tucker! She figured this must've one of his past lives, and she realized she missed him more than ever. He understood her, he took care of her, he was perfect for her, and she loved him. She had always loved him, ever since she had first laid eyes on him, but she could never bring herself to say it out loud. When she had met him, it was as if some unseen force had drawn them to each other, like they were destined to be together. Now she regretted not saying she loved him, because she might never see him again.

    "Good day, Jane Gabrielle of the year 2011 AD. As you have probably figured, I am Sir Sebastian of Wickerole, but you may call me Sebastian if you wish." Sebastian had greeted her when they met.
    "I know you are having a hard time adjusting to this time, and accepting the challenge of keeping me and the Princess together, but I ask you now, if you can find it in your heart to help us, I will be in your debt for eternity."
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    I had no idea what to write so hopefully this is ok 
     
  11.  YOU ARE MY HERO! :3
     
  12. I LOVE IT SO FAR!!!!
     
  13. Ahaha thanks MORDICI  i named the princess emily bc thats my first name and jane was named after my middle name. I didnt think anyone would like it but thank u all 
     
  14. How could I not like a medieval story?