The Other Guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ThisIsJoycee (01), Nov 29, 2011.

  1. Hey!
    Before you read this story I just wanna say thanks for even clicking on the story and planning on reading everything!
    This is my first time writing a story so please leave any comments ans suggestions if you want.
    Thank you again and enjoy!


    Moving

    “We’re moving.” My mom just came home from work and barged in the kitchen like a mad woman.
    “You’re joking right?” I asked not wanting to believe her crazy suggestion or more like her crazy order.
    “No Diana, I’m not” She was serious this time. Like dead serious.
    "But..."
    "No buts." It was like she planned it all along from the start.
    "Mom, just calm down for a while we can talk about..."
    "I said NO. Don't argue with me and go to your room" She cut me off again. Like I said, I really had no say in this."


    I packed my things, the last pieces of my memories. I didn’t know why we had to move, why I was being forced to leave my unforgettable memories with my friends and especially Luke.
    The times we spent together – every touch, every smile and every kiss was just . . . wonderful and difficult to leave behind.

    I didn’t understand the sudden decision my mom made and I probably never would. It was completely unfair for her to make decisions alone.

    I just wish that she had enough guts to look me in the eyes and tell me the real reason of moving to another city.

    I sat down on my bed thinking about what would happen when I would leave.
    A NEW LIFE
    NEW FRIENDS
    A NEW SCHOOL in a town where I didn’t even want to be in.

    I started to sob quietly. I just felt so alone. I shook my head and tried to stop thinking about it because the thought of leaving was killing me inside.
    I knew that it wouldn’t change anything. I just had to deal with it on my own. I laid down on my bed, tired and half asleep shutting out my other thoughts of the next few days.

    Hoped you liked it. I know theres nothing much now but I hope you'll be bumpin Thanks
     
  2. HIYA JOYCE  BUMP! 
     
  3. Hiya TheAndi!! Thanks:)) Can you please also suggest to other people and are you sure the story is alright??
     
  4. Yeah I did. Check Crush On You  Yeah it is! And who gave you the idea? AHEM AHEM AHEM. 
     
  5. Hahahah of course I checked CRUSH ON YOU!! LOVED IT Hahahah who else??
     
  6. Thanks for those who bumped and for giving my story a chance I need two more bumps!!
     
  7. BTW the part when She and her mom were talking was a flashback
     
  8. Can I bump again? 
     
  9. Hahhahah if you want to but it doesn't count hahahah sorry
     
  10. Fine then!  hahahahahahaha suure Joyce 
     
  11. Hahahhaha Love ya
     
  12. Okay guys I know I said I needed 2 more bumps but I think 5 bumps is good enough for me so here goes!
    Hope you like it
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    I woke up early the next morning still feeling as if I was going to crumble into pieces.
    This really sucks.
    My head wasn’t clear and I really needed to talk Luke. He deserved to know the truth even if it was going to be devastating for him to hear.
    It would be totally unfair to him and besides I didn’t want him to just wake up and find me gone.

    I arrived at the front door of Luke’s apartment. I breathed in a lungful of air and a wave of anxiety suddenly washed over me.
    Ugghh... Okay here goes. It's ok Diana you can do this.
    My palms started to sweat and my stomach churned. I was hesitant to even knock on his door so I took another deep breath and instead I had the sudden urge to run as far away as I could.
    But before I could escape, Luke was already there - shirtless and grease stained on his perfect masculine body.
    I was beginning to space out. Then I took an even deeper breath and coughed. I could smell cigar smoke like everywhere.
    It was Luke’s bad habit but he refused to call it a "bad habit."

    He smiled; his messy golden blonde hair brushed his face. Goosebumps started to form on my skin because let’s face it he was blistering and utterly handsome.
    “Hey” he said in his deep voice but before I could even return his greeting he kissed me right there and then.
    I suddenly couldn’t bring up the courage to tell him about me leaving. He tightly held my waist, I didn’t pull away instead I passionately kissed him back.
    Uh oh what have I gotten myself into??

    I know it sucks but I hope you'll keep bumpin
     
  13. Me first again  BUMP! 
     
  14. ATTENTION TO ALL THE READERS!!
    Please forget about my second update because it is wrong and I need to add more things. Im very sorry I will update a new one Thanks 
     
  15. I woke up early the next morning still feeling as if I was going to crumble into pieces.
    This really sucks.
    It was a Saturday so there was no school which meant I had the whole day to tell Luke the truth even if it was going to be devastating for him to hear.

    I arrived at the front door of Luke’s house.
    I breathed in a lungful of air and a wave of anxiety suddenly washed over me.
    Ugghh... Okay here goes. It's ok Diana you can do this.
    My palms started to sweat and my stomach churned. I was hesitant to even knock on his door so I took another deep breath and instead I had the sudden urge to run as far away as I could.
    But before I could escape, Luke was already there - grease stained on his hands. He was wearing a white muscle tee that clung to his body, showing off his six pack perfectly.
    I guess he was working on his old car.
    He smiled; his messy golden blonde hair brushed his face. Goosebumps started to form on my skin because let’s face it he was blistering and utterly handsome.
    “Hey” he said in his deep voice but before I could even return his greeting, he kissed me right there and then.
    I suddenly couldn’t bring up the courage to tell him about me leaving. He tightly held my waist, I didn’t pull away instead I passionately kissed him back.

    Uh oh what have I gotten myself into??

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    I hope you guys enjoyed it! Keep bumpin