The orphan

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Jazaraztaz (01), Oct 29, 2011.

  1. My name is Jerry, im 16 years old im a teenage girl and im an orphan.

    Im wtiting this diary because im proberly not going to make it out of here alive... I wanted someone to find this, to read this so it never happens to anyone else again..

    Im sitting in the attic huddled behind an old box filled with old junk. Im writing by candlelight. I have my favourite white dress on. Although its tattered and worn. Today was ment to be the day i move out. I was ment to get out of here for once and for all but something went terribly, terribly wrong..
     
  2. Let me know if you like it... And ill write more 
     
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  4. St. Trinity's orphange is all ive ever known. My bed, my roomates, my dinner table, my book. Day after day it hardly ever changes. Except one day it did... Oneday it all changed .

    Adrean, karla and i awoke like every other day. Made our beds and prepared for the day. As we headed down stairs giggling and frolicking about. We were abrubtly holted at the bottom of the stairs by a groomly silence.

    Noone was there, not even nanny harris. Us girls were stunned we searched all over the dorms and even the backyard but noone was to be found.

    We slumped inside to find a man standing in the foyer. He looked like he was looking for something. As we got closer to him i studied his features , he must have been in his late 20s because he didnt look old. His short black hair complimented by his green eyes and tanned skin stood searching our little faces.. His face lit up with an angelic smile. He seemed nice... But what did we know we were young.
     
  5. "hello girls, im Adrean parker, im going to be the new owner of St Trinitys"
    We looked him up and down with unsure faces.
    "everyone else has gone for a walk but you three can help me prepare for morning tea in the kitchen"

    " im not to sure mister. nanny harris says we shouldnt trust strangers"
    "dont worry girls im going to hurt you, think of me as your daddy"
    Our little faces lit up with joy
    The other two girls ran off to the kitchen, but i stayed something about this man made my tummy whirl around.

    He looked down at me and reached out for my hand.
    " Jerry, nanny Harris told me alot about you, she said you were special and different."
    I became intreged.
    "and if you let me id like to take extra care of you... Is that okay?"

    That day I took that mans hand, i trusted a complete stranger..... I should have listened to to what nanny harris said about strangers
     
  6. Adrean was amazing with the girls, he combed their hair, read them books and decorated their rooms.
    He was loved by all the girls at St Trinitys even by me.

    It must have been on my 15th birthday he gave me emerald pendant. I wore it everywhere, i never took it off. I thought the world of him and in return he took extra care of me.. Just like he said he would.

    "your hair looks beutiful with this red ribbon in it Jerry"
    He said while running his fingers through my hair.
    My spine tingled.
    "what are you going to wear today sweetheart?" he gestured to the wordrobe.
    "im not too sure"
    I shrugged my shoulders at him.
    "hmmm how about this cute little dress?"
    I smiled. I liked that dress.

    I bundled up the dress in my arms and headed toward the bathroom.
    " um Jerry stay in here please ill help you out"
    I looked at him unsure.
    But he continued smiling and waved at me to go over by him.
    I reluctantly made my way over.

    He placed his hands gently on the bottom of my pj shirt and lifted it slowly over my head.
    I quivered.
    "its okay Jerry, im not going to hurt you" he said while stroking my arms.
     
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  8. Should i keep going? 
     
  9. I could feel the crisp, fresh morning breeze roll through the window. As it slid along my skin shivers ran diwn my spine.
    " you are beautiful Jerry "
    I smiled shyly back at him as he pet my face with the back of his hand.

    He made me feel special in a wierd way. It didnt quite feel right. He never touched the other girls like he touched me, he never told them what he told me. I never asked him why i just sat and enjoyed the company.

    He never hurt me or anything all he did was look. That was untill my 16th birthday... The day i became a woman... Well thats what he said anyway.
     
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