the Obituary 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *S14 (01), Aug 21, 2012.

  1. Hello! This is a new story that I brainstormed up awhile ago. At that point in time, it was going to be a 3 person collab, but stuff happened and it will only be me writing this story.

    The first update will be coming shortly. 
     
  2. Jessica's POV

    My feet pound against the unstable wooden floors of the factory as I dart out into the foreboding darkness that awaits me on the dimly lit streets of Seattle.

    The sounds of my pursuers eventually fade into the night, but I don't stop.

    I can't. It's not safe yet.

    I continue to jog down the noticeably empty streets, my backpack thudding against my body as I run.

    After a few more minutes, I turn left and come to a stop in a deserted alley.

    I pace up and down the alley, thinking.

    Thinking about how I could have possibly been so careless as to fall for his lousy trap.

    How I actually believed this all would soon be over. That my life would return back to how it once was.

    But I realize now, that this game of his is far from over..

    But, I will never give up.

    I will find you Jack... That's a promise.
     
  3. Great job so far! I like it!
     
  4. I like it.
    Bump.
     
  5. Thank you! Working on the next POV/Update now. 
     
  6. This is an awesome start
     
  7. Awesomesauce! 
     
  8. Jack's POV

    "What the hell do you want with me?" I yelled at the dark haired man sitting across from me.

    No response. As always.

    He never responds. Always just a smirk. An intimidating smirk.

    A smirk that makes me think that he knows way more than he gives off.

    I turn away from him and wriggle in the seat, trying to escape the bonds that held me captive.

    A deep voice interrupts my struggle. "Jessica DiLaurentis is your sister, correct?"

    I glance up from the floor and calmly say, "Oh so you can speak?"

    He sighs. "Indeed I can. Now answer my question. Is Jessica
    DiLaurentis your older sister?"

    "What does Jess have to do with you kidnapping me?" I angrily spit back.

    "Ah, so Jessica is a touchy subject I see." He smirks.

    "I swear to god, when I escape, the first thing I will do is wipe that damned smirk off your face."

    He laughs. "When you escape? Funny thing is, Jack, you won't escape. Not tonight, not tomorrow, not next month, never."

    "Oh yeah?" I confidently say.

    "Yeah. Because Jessica won't be here to save you."

    "And why won't she be?"

    "Jessica was lured into a trap yesterday. We led her to believe you were being held captive in a factory a few towns over. She managed to escape, but my men caught up with her soon after." He grins maniacally.

    He continues, "She couldn't even save herself. You expect her to save you?" He begins to chuckle.

    My head drops and my eyes find a stain on the ground.

    "Little Jessica didn't put up much of a fight though she only-"

    I stood up, the wooden chair coming with me.

    I couldn't control my anger any longer.

    The man gasped as I flung myself over the desk at him. He toppled backwards in the chair and his skull hit the concrete wall behind him with a resounding thud.

    "That's for Jessica.", I say as I stand over his lifeless body.
     
  9. .. I just did. 
     
  10. AWESOME UPDATE!!!! BUMP!!!
     
  11. Wait, DiLaurentis? As in Pretty Little Liars?
     
  12. I LOVE IT UPDATE BEFORE I FREAKIN EXPLODE!!!!!!!
     
  13. OMG THANK YOU I COULDN'T FIGURE OUT WHERE THE HELL I GOT THAT LAST NAME FROM 

    And sorry guys, there probably won't be an update tomorrow... I have school orientation 8am-12 and then a concert that night. A friend is going to be here all day, and she's sleeping over so... I promise updates on Thursday! 
    I will try to write some. Maybe a surprise update tomorrow. MAYBE
     
  14. Okay yay!
     
  15. I'll update tomorrow. I promise. 
     
  16. Good story. I'll leave now. 