The Little Girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Miaxxx, Jan 31, 2016.

  1. Chapter 1:
    I stare out to the streets on the balcony. I look at my cigarette and throw it out on to the streets. I watch people walking by. But the thing I'm really looking at is a little girl in a faded pink dress. Her eyes are full of tears. She looks up at me. I avert my eyes. I want to cry. I can't help her. I have a long bath and think about the girl. I get out and cover my self with my towel. My long blonde hair falls past my waist. I lie out on my bed. I can't stop myself. I get my iPhone out.
    "Ricky, where the hell are you?! I've been waiting for the past few days!"
    "Look, babe, I told you the work would go on"
    "Don't babe me. I'm sick of you always lying to me. We're over"
    "Please, Michelle. I..."
    I clicked the end button.
    I screamed into my pillow.
    End of Chapter 1, would you like me to continue?Thanks for reading?
     
  2. Chapter 2, The Restless Night:
    I turn the lights off and try to get to sleep.
    I hear the girl crying.
    It gets closer. I look around my room. Nope.
    I check outside. I see her sleeping on a stray dog. I want to help her. I can't do it now. I get to sleep. I wake to hear loud knocking on my door. It's the little girl. I can't say anything. I'm silent. I don't want to open the door. In truth, I want to call the cops.
    "I know you can see me"
    I'm shocked. She looks at the eyehole. Her eyes are pure black. I can't look away. I stand there for what feels like centuries. I wake up. I had a terrible nightmare. Yet it felt so real. I need to get outside. I quickly bush my hair and my teeth. I slip on skinny jeans and a tank top. I slip my bag round my shoulder. I pick out my pair of high heels. I run outside. The girl is there. Looking at me. She has piercing blue eyes. I walk to her.
    End of Chapter 2?
     
  3. Oh interesting wht was up with the little girl why couldn't she help her out? And ohhh thats a creepy ass dream why didnt she just help the first time insted of waiting a whole day ?
     
  4. Should I continue?
     
  5. ^yes please 
     
  6. Wow, make other stories!!
     
  7. LITTLE DONKEY, LITTLE DONKEYYY