The Kiss of Pain

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 4, 2011.

  1. His kiss, consuming me. I stumbled back, he pinned me down. The kiss, so passionate and loving. Yet he was evil. He was a monster. I loved him. The passion we shared shook the earth. This kiss; just a kiss, was so forbidden, that hell could've broke out. The kiss, blinded me. Blackness and darkness took over my body, kissing every inch of it. Thorns pierced my skin, making blood flow around us. Flames licked the blood and red roses covered our bodies. Vines and thorns attacked us, forbidding us to go any farther. Using force to do so. But we didn't stop. We went further. He held my hand, whispering words that were supposed to make me regret. But these words only made me want to never let go. "Whatever happens, stay with me... Trust me... I want to be with you..."
    This sentence alone would've destroyed the world, and yet we laid there, the tension grew and the passion rose. He held my hand, not letting go. Our hands entwined, our bodies caged in thorns. Our tears of pleasure and pain became roses. The world burned of hellfire, screams and shrieks were heard, but we blocked them out, our heads were back in ecstasy. We enjoyed every moment. Every moment till the very End.

    "Never let go."
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    This is a little story I wrote. It's about a angel and another demon. Their love was forbidden but they couldn't hide it any longer. So technically speaking, they destroyed the world with just one kiss. Scary Eh?
     
  2. That is an interesting idea.
     
  3. I'm in love. Will you please continue? You are a splendiferous writer!!
     
  4. This one is over though...
     
  5. Awww!!! Well a girl can dream lol I like where it ended....leaves a shroud of peace behind..even though they killed the earth...but you know what I mean
     
  6. Awesome!!!
     
  7. I love your stories:)
     
  8. Demons and Angels dont mixyet they can to destroy the world . Awesome story though i like where it went with the demonXAngel thing
     
  9. Ugh. Failure stings my eyes. .-.

    I BANISH THEE TO THE PITS OF FORGOTTEN MEMORIES. ,_,
     
  10. I bump you! Update!
     
  11. For I brought upon this story and demand you to update the story
     
  12. Your really good, write more!  you got another fan lol
     
  13. ... ._.


    No. This died like six months ago. ,_,

    And before you scream at me for showing disrespect to the author, mind you, I AM the author.