The Karma

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Stud_Wiz_Khalifa (01), Oct 19, 2012.

  1. It my first story I might be goo with so I'm gonna work with it
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    Junior Jordan's dog barking at the window Jordan wakes up "what junior?"jordan Stammered. Junior starts scratching the window. Jordan sees a figure in the bushes then realizes its just Sammy. He walks down stairs and opens the door "Sammy why were you in the bushes?"Jordan questions her.
    She blushes "um......cause I was being stupid?" She Replies. Jordan laughs then invites her inside.

    They walk to the kitchen Jordan opens the refrigerator
    "You hungry" Jordan questions her. Jordan looks at her patiently "yea I would like some water too" she says. He gets a glass and fills it with water and makes her a Sandwich,puts it on a plate and slides plate to her quickly and drops the glass on accident. He gets a cut by the broken glass he holds the cut with a cloth with blood dripping from the cloth. Sammy puts a bandage on it "are you ok Jordan"Sammy questions him. He sits on the chair of the kitchen table "yea I'm fine" he says.
     
  2. Grammer. Details. Punctuation. Check those three things.
     
  3. Grammar, punctuation, spell check, details, proofread, and no telling Percy to shoo he a good guy
     
  4. It's good just fix some stuff up hehe 