I run to the nearest tree for cover, and unload my backpack. I find a mace,a stone, and dried fruit. I can't believe that I have still have to kill my best friend. Effie had to pick Diego! We've been friends forever and we've comforted each other through these past years. These last two weeks have been stupid!!! His brother dying in the mine explosion!!! The first time I've ever seen Diego cry. His last sibling Zek, gone. Zek brought great memories. Zek filled in the empty spot my father left when he died. Zek taught me to shoot an arrow without falling into wet dirt. He showed me to sing songs that could silence all mockingjays. Zek took us on Sundays to the woods to ice skate. Now I'll die empty, knowing my best friend, more than a friend is dying or going to die. "I've been looking for you darling" shouts a familiar voice. I turn and see.......Pon.
Yup, Fan Fiction. And don't use multiple exclamation marks, it makes the story seem unprofessional. Also refrain from posting sentence after sentence that all end with exclamation marks.