★Eva★ " Earth to Eva, Earth to Eva!" " Huh... what Juan? " my Asian bestfriend gave me 'the' look " Eva you spaced out...again." He stated. "phew.. cut me some slack, they were fighting again! I can't take it anymore, I want out. I just have to wait for 10 months and then I'm a free bird. why do people even believe in it? its so stupid and fake." "Eva, no it doesn't. cut love some slack." He stated giving me a sad smile " Juan how many times do i have to tell you 'Love SUCKS'. My parent 'had' the best fairytale marriage a girl could want. My mother belonged to a very rich family and my father..... was the son of an army official. They met in college fell in love and eloped. YES eloped. Dad earned a lot and became the 5th richest man in USA and my grandparents took them back ( her parents). long story short, my Mom gave everything to my Dad and he rubbed it on her face, he cheated on her. They can not have a divorce because their ' social image' will be destroyed , ya as the shouting and public tantrums helps. Moral of the story: you love, it breaks you. To love is to destroy. And I 'Eva Ice Edward' have no intention to be destroyed. EVER." I muttered under my breath. "- so what I was saying was he looked so hot... Eva are you listening? Juan continued ignoring me completely "Ya, What were you saying? who looks hot? " I asked totally confused " I'm talking about Evan, Eva! where did your brother buy that T-shirt from ? " " eww... stop checking my brother out!" I hissed totally disgusted. " Hey ! don't blame me! well its not your fault you share looks! He is your twin as last " "We only share the eyes and hair juan! I Don't look like him" I stated outraged " Ya the beautiful sea blue eyes and the silky black hair! Your curves, his biceps and ohh the beautiful 8 packs And don't forget the drool worthy dimples You both share, you twins could pass for models!" Juan argued " You and your gayness" I sighed giving up. { The author has NO problem from gays nor does she intend any offence} " Aren't we late for calculus? " I asked "Oh god ! Run eva before That old hag Mrs. Raven eats us raw" And then me and my only bestfriend ran for our lives ****$*$*$*$*$*$*$*$*$*$*$* *Harry* 'As I walked along the corridor, I kicked the can I found laying on the floor 'Harry, Please dont do that.' My mother hissed in my ear I sighed. " Mrs. Black I'll now take your son to his class, you may leave." A Lady informed my mother. 'And this is our maths class,taught by Mr.Raven' The lady opened the door as her mane of Brunette hair swished in the reflection of the windows.' I stumbled into the room and almost got crushed by at lest 20 pairs of judging eyes "Good Morning, Dear" Mrs. raven wished me " Here you are! So class this is the new student I just mentioned. Please introduce yourself young man. " great just great. I cleared my throat and begun " Hey, I'm Harry black and I am 17 years like most of you and before this I went to st. vesilssa High in Newyork and I-" I was interrupted by a great froce and I almost face palmed the floor. the door had been opened and it hit me... hard on my ass. Between all the pain I saw her, catching her breath. I gasped. I watched as her head lifted up and as she carelessly swept her flicks over revealing her bright blue eyes. she realized what she had just done and apologized in a hurry. She had long legs, and the most curvaceous body I had ever seen. I was hyperventilating. Her long raven black hair, the curve of her hip, her full ,oh so full lips and the way she talked. She was so Beautiful, so delicate and gorgeous, what the hell! stop acting like a girl Harry, You are a player be a man; I don't think she is beautiful. Just a girl I want to be in bed with. She is hot not beautiful. Act cool. Just a girl I have seen chicks hotter than her, lyer. " Now if you are done checking out my friend, will you please let me pass? " An Asian boy said loudly. So loud that that the whole class erupted into fits of laughter. I could have sworn that my face had turned as red as blood. " Silence children!" Mrs. Raven howled. " Ms. Eva and Mr. Yang, Late as always. detention after school and have a talk with me after the class please. Now you may sit " She said giving a fake smile. Eva walked towards her seat and her friend followed her like a lost puppy. I felt a pang of a very strong feeling that I had never felt before. Jealousy. " Mr. Black you can sit next to Mr. Tomwell, Mr.Tomwell please raise your hand." A Brunette boy raised his hand and gave me a playful smile, I walked over to him and let my bag fall of my shoulder. I looked across the room and saw the girl... Eva sitting there. " Hey man! my names John?" He asked of course trying to start a conversation. " Hey John, you play sports ?" I asked returning his smile. " Ya, I am in the soccer team. what about you?" " Even I played soccer In my old school, I was the quarterback there" I informed. "Wow dude, hey would you like to have lunch with us? we could learn so new techniques from you!" John said. " Class, This is not a free hour! open page number 57 and start from question number 15 if you people don't want detention."Mrs. Raven threatened " wow, I already Hate her" I commented. " That makes two of us." john smirked. I continued to stare at Eva's head, her long black hair shining " Don't man" John said " what ?" I asked looking at him " You are giving her the love sick look. Don't its useless, you'll never get her" He said looking at Eva with admiration clear in his eyes. " why is she taken?" I asked, my stomach fell John gave a humorless laugh " No, I wish it was that, but no.We call ice, do you know why? " " why?" I asked He got a dreamy look "Because she has a heart of ice, and I know how much cliché it sounds, like some part of a chickflick man, but no. She has never let a boy come close to her. She is ice, one that no one can melt " His dreamy look vanished by a serious one " Stay away from her, because if you fall for her, you will be destroyed, fucked. You are not the only boy who likes her, oh scratch that more than half the male student body is in love with her." "uh...." talk about weird, I just got a freakig philosophy lesson in maths. " And why do people like her?" "First, she is rich, very rich. second, man are you blind? I mean fucking look at her! Third, She is the forbidden fruit. A heart of ice that every boy in the school wants to change." I smirked and looked straight at the back of her head. "I was the school biggest player, I get every girl I wish for. I will be the one to melt the heart of ice" I smirked " we'll see, but don't lose in your game" john scoffed. *******?????????***** *Harry* Right now I am sitting here at the popular's table, with john on my right and a girl with a handkerchief for a skirt almost giving me a lap dance, I really don't see much difference here if compared to my old school "So, do you have any girlfriend?" The girl sitting in front of me purred. wow girls here are easy. "No, I mean I am an all ladies man, Why be with one and disappoint the others?" I winked at all the girls on the table and while the boys Wolfe whistled. "Okay girls has anybody seen Evan?" A girl demanded while she marched to our table. "what did he do now Jenny?" The lap dance girl asked. "Anna, What did he not do! I just heard he was flirting with a group of cheerleaders!" Jenny sulked "Keep it down Jenny, you guys were never official. Be cool." A guy named jem tried to reason. " speak of the devil, and here he comes" Announced John I turned my head to see a boy marching towards us, A look of pure fury on his face. He had jet black hair and familiar piercing blue eyes. " John we need to talk, its Important" He demanded. " Evan! you son of a bitch, you man wh-' Jenny screamed Evan held up a hand and said " Not now" "Man cool down, But the way,This is the New kid, we have calcus together." I looked up at Evan and smirked " Hey man" I greeted " You are the new kid? " Evan asked, I nodded and saw somthing shift in his eyes, he walked over to me and hissed "Stay away from her" and then his fist connected with my nose, I fell back and a pain shot through my nose and I felt blood pour out of my nose. *Eva* I ran as fast as I could after to catch up with Evan but my crushed by a crowd of guys asking how I was doing or had I changed my mind. But when I reached the canteen, Evan was marching over to 'Mr . desperate ass hole' as it happened so fast, I don't know Evans fist connected with the boys face and he flew backwards, literary flew ;With blood everywhere and then I heard a scream, My scream. ***#*#*#*#*#*#?#?#?#? *Eva* I was never fond of violence, and seeing a lot of it at home, I hated it. ~Flash Back~ " You filthy dog! how dare you? this is my house! You heard me? this. is. my. house!" My mother screamed at my father, and closed our bedroom door on his face.I and Evan were shell shocked and were hiding behind our bed, my mother picked us up and got in the bed with to give comfort. Suddenly the door started to shake wildly and my father screamed " You bitch! you want the house ? fucking have it! Come out you coward, I' ll make you lick the house." I dont what came on me but I got up from the bed and marched to the door, opened the lock and tried to peek outside, I don't know what I expected, I really don't know. Maybe I expected that dad would cool down at the sight of his daughter, maybe I could fight him maybe- maybe we could reason things out. Maybe... but no. the moment I opened the door dad shoved me aside, my back hitting the wall; knocking the air out of me I sat up bending my head to hide my tears because strong girls dont cry, Then I heard a scream and even now when I think of it I shudder. He had marched over to the bed, to my scared mother and punched her. Punched. There was boold everywhere and when I saw my brothers face, it had blood on it; my mothers blood. His face- it was hard- stiff rather, he stared straight in my eye as if saying ' Its your fault all your fault' and I realised it was my fault. I had opened the door, my mother got hit because of me. I screamed but it didn't sound like me. ~ Flashback Ends~ I look at the boy who had just got hit; he was trying to stand up wiping the blood off his face. For Evan, he has the same hard look he had then and it scares me. Guilt engulfed me and I felt like I just got hit by a truck. Now Evan would get into trouble because of me again, for protecting me. Again someone got hurt because of me. I was making people's life hell, getting them in trouble. Suddenly I couldn't breath. I was having another panick attack with which over the years I had become so familiar, my legs betrayed me and I fell on the ground, the floor cool beneath my face and I wondered that how I could be so pathetic? I hear someone call my name, but it felt so far- so faint.The world spun, like those tops. My vision danced, spotting my vision with different colours of blue and green. My vision was growing dimmer with every second. Just before the light completely vanished I saw Evans face filled with concern and- fear. When I woke up, I really couldn't feel much, just a tightness in my chest like I had a very bad cold. My eyelids felt heay and my lips couldn't move. "are you fine?" someone asks concerned. I open my eyes to look at Evan, a frown set on his face. " Are you awake" he asks I smiled or well tried to and got up in a sitting position to ssay " No, genius it's a very common thing to have your eyes open when you are unconscious" Evan snorted,his face visibly relaxing " Well , of course this is our old ice." I smirked. Then again his face grew serious " You are not on your medication- are you?" Evan demanded. I smiled and shook my head "Eva! you irresponsible bra-' His lecture was thankfully cut short by the school nurse " Evan,you are called to the principles office now." He took a deep breath, gave me the 'this is not over' look and walked away. Now I stared to note the familiar details of the nurses room, the light blue wall, pink curtains, the bed I was lying on and I suddenly noticed something I hadn't before, across me was sitting the boy giving me a lazy smile his nose swollen, the area near it turning blue- black; pure ugly. I snorted and smirked at him. He looked rather offended and said " Don't smirk , this is the sign of war, other girls die for it " My smirk fell , jerk. Curiosity took the best of me and I asked " Why did you change school in the middle of the year?" his look darkened and he gave me the ' don't mess with me missy' look. Smug, I looked at him checkmate bitch. suddenly His eyes shone as if he got an idea and my victory lost some of its luster. His expression smug he said "What medicine was your boyfriend talking about?" I gave him the hard look until I realised what he had just said. " Boyfriend?" I asked at the peek of my hysterical laughing. " ya..." he said confused I pressed my lips together and said " Are you blind? can't you see the resemblance? we are freaking twins!" He started at me in disbelief Then again his annoying smirk appeared he winked and came closer before seductively saying " You were scared for me, weren't you? That's why you fainted! we know each other loke for not even one day and already you love me! Girl that was fast" jerk. I growl and jump off the bed to leave banging the door of the room, behind me I hear him shout " By the way babe, My name Is Harry black, I guess you should know that so you could fill your diary with my name" jerk. ------------------------------------------'-------'-''''------- I smirk at her retreating figure, flinching slightly by the pain her brother has caused me. Then I remember something and run behind her, "ice" I shout; no answer "ice" "ice,ice,ice,ice...ice,ice" I repeat "what" she snaps and turns around abruptly, causing me to almost smack my chest on her forehead. "wow, babe I know you are in love with me and are playing the 'hard to get' thing so you don't seem easy,but you don't need to!" I say winking, she rolls her eyes snorts , and walks away. woah, she just did not. I run to keep up with her, " wow girl, A hot boy like me is running behind you and you walked away?" I demand with a smirk "Are you freaking gay? I mean who is so- so obsessed with themselves?Not even my gay best friend. Go check your hair, pretty boy!" she babbled; her hands making weird movements. "I don't like you and the sooner you that the better, now leave." "Well.." I said ignoring her previous comment "Because of your brother's little 'stunt' we have to go to the principles office...like now, and babe I am new so I need you to show me the way." I said smirking. "oh god! Why? did I have any less problems in my life that you sent him?" she said in exasperation and she punched my arm. "Ouch! is there like a violence problem in your family? first that brother now you, the next thing I know your guinea pig is showing his karate skills on me" I demand and she gave me a dark look but there was a hint of smile on her face. "I don't have a guinea pig, and they can't do karate. Now come on pretty boy, I don't want to get into any more trouble" "Harry" I corrected her.
I'd suggest proofreading, because there are a lot of spelling/grammar/punctuation/capitalization errors. Also please don't make it the typical high school drama love story we've all read a million times. Overall, though, it's not a bad start.️ Keep writing. I'll be reading.