The Great PimD Famine...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by _MooCow, Nov 14, 2011.

  1. Oh Gosh, this is the first story I've ever posted on PimD. I'll write the first chapter and if to guys like it, I'll continue it. 

    Chapter 1.

    It was a bright sunny day in the land of PimD. All were happy, all were having a great day. Everyone in PimD was playing around in forums, some talking on campus and some sending gifts to friends. There was not a negative action or thought in PimD land till something happened... Something terrible happened...

    The overlords of the world decided that making another 4th Magical world would be a good idea. There was already PimDian land, (PimD for short) KaWatchian land (KaW for short) and lastly FChunga land. (FC for short)

    Each world had there own special power, PimD was a friendly and helpful land, KaW was good at making potitions and defense systems and FC were good at making battle devices.

    The overlords decided to make a 4th magical world called GaWatchel, (GaW for short) this world would be good at attacking, defending and recruiting people.

    As soon as this world was created, many people flocked from far and wide to get there. Members even left there current world to go there.

    It had only be 7 efeldays in GaW when they were already become power crazy. A war broke out and all players in GaW headed to FC to take over. A huge war started in FC land and many members died, many members left and FC were becoming weaker by the day it was only a matter of time till GaW took over...
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    So that's it do far, what do you think? It's pretty bad hey?

    Well please leave a comment below 

    If you think it's crap jut say so, I made this just then, it took me only 4 Minutes to make.

    Oh and if your wondering why it's the "Great Famine of PimD" that's in the next chapter
     
  2. Brilliant story! More please!!
     
  3. Really? Yay people like it :)
     
  4. It's a pretty good idea