I'm a 5 foot 5 inch, 11 grader getting ready for the start of the school day. I take off my varsity football jacket and put into my locker, then head off to homeroom.
As I walk into homeroom, I say hello to my buds and sit at my desk. The announcements come on and as usual I'm not paying attention to it. The bell rings and off to math class for me. I'm walking down the hall past a bunch of freshmen when I get pushed by a kid in a hurry. I'm about to freak out when I run into a short, blonde-haired, blue eyes freshmen and her books fall to ground. I get on my knees to pick up her books and go to say sorry but I get stunned. "uhhh uhhh" is all I can say. She smiles and rakes her books back. I try again to talk and say "I'm really sorry that happened but I'm glad it did." She smiles and says "I'm Morgan". "I'm Johnny, nice to meet u Morgan" "Nice to meet u too Johnny" she says as she smiles and fixes her. "I uhh better get to class." I manage to say. "hopefully I'll see you around." "I'd like that" she says as we part out separate ways. This is my first story on here. What do u think so far? Oh and this actually happened.
Hmm, I like how you write, present tense, it's odd, it's like you're writing just as it happens, but I do like it. Any chance of me being a character?
It's true so not really. And yeah I'm writing it as if it was happening now but it happened months ago. Like at the beginning of the school year. Thanks!
Oh okay, fair enough, and are you the short 11th grader? So you're a Junior? (I'm English, I don't know how the American high school system works) Anyway, update often and you'll get better and better with practice. If you ever need any help with writing in the future just ask me.
Oh really? I am considered tall but where I live about 5'8" is average, anyway, continue with the story, I like it, a lot.
I walk into math class with all smiles. Which is very weird because I'm usually tired and grouchy first period. Today was a different day. I couldn't stay focussed. All I thought about was Morgan. The bell rang and off to second period. I've seen her around in school but I knew I never saw her on my way to study hall but would see her going to English, 3rd period. Second period came and went and I was excited to see her going to English. As I was walking to third period I saw her walking past me. So I changed my course and caught up to her. "hey Morgan," I hollered as she slowed her pace. "oh hey Johnny" she said with a smile. "how was 1st and 2nd period?" I asked her. "it was good but I'm better now. Oh here's my class" she said as she points to the Art room." she stands up against a locker and I lean up against one. We talk for a second later and then say our goodbyes. I watch her walk into the room and she looks back and smiles at me. I smile back. And then jog to my next class so that I'm not late. I walk in with a smile on my face again and my teacher gives me the look. I say "what mrs. Pinchot? I'm not late am I" "no" she says with a laugh "but you were close" As her last word came out of her mouth the bell rang.
Haha, true that, but in my school we get shunned for being with someone 2 or more years apart from us but love cannot be stopped