the girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Arc_Angel, Sep 29, 2011.

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    'Yawn'...."Morning mum..how are you this morning"?? "Good Cody, you better get ready for school! As I walk into the kitchen to make my lunch I hear weeps out the window. I say to mum I will be back and so I go outside to check it out....There she was, beautiful as ever!!! She was in the big chunky tree next to the fence. "What's wrong"?? "Just go away please!" As I walk closer towards the tree she keeps weeping in the corner of the branch right next to the fence. I start to climb the tree and she notices that I'm coming closer and she jumps off the branch onto the other side of the fence and runs away. In shock I watch her run, then mum walks outside...."Cody stop mucking around and come get ready for school".
     
  2. I like it lol!!
     
  3. Its great! Just a suggestion try n make your sentences a bit shorter but i love it!
     
  4. Aww that's so cute