The Girl Part 1

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Arc_Angel, Sep 19, 2011.

  1. THIS IS MY FIRST SO BE GENTLE

    'Yawn'...."Morning mum..how are you this morning"?? "Good Cody, you better get ready for school! As I walk into the kitchen to make my lunch I hear weeps out the window. I say to mum I will be back and so I go outside to check it out....There she was, beautiful as ever!!! She was in the big chunky tree next to the fence. "What's wrong"?? "Just go away please!" As I walk closer towards the tree she keeps weeping in the corner of the branch right next to the fence. I start to climb the tree and she notices that I'm coming closer and she jumps off the branch onto the other side of the fence and runs away. In shock I watch her run, then mum walks outside...."Cody stop mucking around and come get ready for school".

    Plz be gentle, my first time
     
  2. I think it's good but what did u guys think
     
  3. It's pretty good also reading other ppls stuff can give u ideas and inspiration, I absolutley LOVE reading and ppl say that my stuffs pretty good so I guess the fact that other things I read help me if u read heaps!!!! Can help u too