The Dragon Riders

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  1. Prolouge:

    " Skulblakusven !" Bridgit screamed. Leading the group was Flame and Veronica. Following them were Salrion, Calkhen and many others. When they landed, Salrion and Calkhen went to collect wood. " Brisingr ! " Veronica said , while rubbing two rocks together , she then light the fire.


    Chapter 1

    Calkhen


    " Help ! " a voice said, I could hear the voice clearly. I don't know who it was. I cant remember. Maybe it was a trap. " Calkhen , Don't Go there, It could be a trap" Bridgit told me. " Bridgit, I'm going anyways" I responded. Be careful brave one My dragon told me with their thoughts. I will I told my dragon with my thoughts.
     
  2. Your a talented writer
     
  3. Better than mine. 
     
  4. Excellent better than me too...
     

  5. Bridget , Salrion , Owen , Fox , Veronica and Unknown


    Bridget

    " Adurna Risa !" I spoke. The water rose in the air and then i manipulated the sphere to an area. " Letta !". Then I got an Idea. So I tried it, the idea worked. But then some urgals came and I tried to fight them with my weapon but they were too big and overpowered me. Then I used a spell that hardly anyone used. The word meant death. Salrion looked at me from where he was fighting and told me what they are, " These creatures are not normal urgals, their Kull." after which I was suprised. Then we desposed of the kull and rendevouz with Our leader and the others.

    Salrion

    " Skulblakusven !" I said. Then I spotted some Raza'ac. " Raza'ac ahead, be careful". Of course my dragon tried to warn me but instead another evil rider tried with magic to kill me. " If the rider dies...So Does his dragon" the rider said as he moved the spear closer to me. Glenwing jumped infront of me and was mortally wounded.

    Owen

    I was in major trouble...The only one helpibg me was Fox
     
  6. Takon

    Xerilla and I flew around but then an arrow almost hit her. Then I used the words meaning "Unite that arrow with my hand" in the ancient language. I sent the arrow straight back the way it came.


    Diamond

    I flew on Kiriak and she landed gracefully on the cliff ahead. " Adurna Risa !". I summoned a sphere of water and then Released the magic.


    Natalie

    My dragon and I flew around. She found a cave. I was hesitant to ask about it. " Skulblakusven !" My voice was clear. Then I was able
    To see how my dragon sees things. I was able to spot a lone urgal and then used the spell meaning
    Death, "Deyjia !"(Is that the spell meaning death I don't remember).
    My dragon and I fought off the urgals that follow the lone one, in the process my dragon was wounded. " Waise Hael !"
     
  7. Ansley

    SnowFlake and I flew to a cave where I met up With a few others. After which We met up with Veronica.
    Ansley ! , SnowFlake Screamed with her mind. SnowFlake, I'm fine I responded. Snowflake be careful I told my dragon. No
    You be careful Small one
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  8. Awesome! eragon ftw
     
  9. Another version of it. You should see what the ending will be. It's going to be Worse than how The Inherritance series will end.
     
  10. Ahh  Am in It Bump