The Disease

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Orisel (01), Jul 14, 2012.

  1. Rushing out of her door, Emma's brown hair blew in the wind. It was a mild Monday morning and Emma was late for school. Running for the bus, she got onto it and gave a sigh of relief. Looking around, she saw.... all of the children from her school. She sat down next to Sophie who was Emma's best friend.
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    Arriving at the school, all of the children rushed through the gates. Emma walked through the gates with Sophie who looked ill. "Are you alright?" whispered Emma
    Sophie nodded her green face. Something wasn't right...
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    Feedback please. Hope you enjoyed
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  2. Part 2 will have POV's and detail