THE DEMONS INSIDE ME

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Aug 8, 2012.

  1. I'm writing this story(obviously) so please comment, and my first update will be short...
    Ok enjoy

    "mammy, when will daddy come back?"
    "soon buttercup, soon"

    Those words, often repeated. I used to look a lot like my mam, wavy brown hair... Blue eyes.
    I might have looked like my dad too but I can't remember him.
    My mam was a lovely women but christi says she wasn't "right" in the head, she had these inner demons and so do I.

    When I was 6 mammy died, she shot herself, those demons inside her, most likely, too much for mam.

    Dad wasn't such a nice man, he was an abusive alcoholic with a bad temper and a bad odour, he used to hit mummy and me, I've still got the scars to remember. They are the only memories I have of him. I wish I knew better.

    Christi is my foster mam, her husband David is my foster dad, I'm moving out soon though.
    They aren't much as parents, they gave me a home but I cook and clean for myself, always have.

    My name is Amy, I'm 19. Sometimes David makes me take theses pills, to stop me from depression. I hate david, he hurts me, he does things to me, he makes me do things I don't want to do and christi let's him because he does it to her too.

    When I get my own place, I'm gonna have to sort myself out and face my inner demons.
     
  2. I like it, But if she was 19 wouldn't she already be out of the house? I thought they got kicked out when they become legal which is 18. But It's good so far 
     
  3. Idk lol thanks though
     
  4. Yeah Keep up the good work
     
  5.  Darn you made story I wanted to do.
    Is this a paranormal story or horror? Because I still might have time.
     
  6. In quotes remember to "Start with a capital letter."

    Great start though!
     
  7. No not paranormal so u go ahead
     
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  9. Yay! Btw this story of ur is at a good start
     
  10. I WILL UPDATE WITHIN 4 DAYS
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