Alright I'm writing the first chapter of my first story. Tell me what u think. Chapter 1 "Come on Danny we don't have all day let's go!" Luka shouted up the spiral stairs. She had long, sleek blond hair that was whisked up into a pony tail. Her eyes were a blue-grey color and had a look of serinity to them. She was wearing a black belly-top and black leather pants that were bell bottoms. She also wore a black trench coat that looked as if it were made for her. She waited at the bottom of the stairs for Danny. The ninja of the family. "Coming" he yelled down the stairs.
Lol here's an update you guys. Danny came sliding down the handrail of the stairs. He had short-cut messy black hair that was windswept at the moment. He was tan because he had just come back from a mission in Australia. He also had chocalate brown eyes that sparked mischeviously when ever he had done some mischief. He was wearing his black hoodie with the hood down along with his gray jeans and his DC sneakers. "You ready?" he asked Luka, smiling his signiture crooked grin. "I suppose so," she replied looking a little annoyed. She had been waiting for awhile. "Alright then let's go!" Danny said as he grabbed Luka's wrist and pulled her to the nearest exit. He opened it with a shove. "Finally some fresh air," Luka said as she pulled her wrist from Danny's grasp.
"one sec lemme whistle for Flemeth," Luka said grabbing the whistle around her neck. She put it to her mouth and blew hard. But no sound came out. "Um are you sure that thing works Luka?" Danny said skepticcly. "Just give it a sec," she said as she strode forword. A sec later a huge shadow covered them. "What the h-" Danny started to say but had to stop as he backfliped out of the path of a speeding fireball. "This is my dragon," Luka said as she waved the creature down. It's scales were a shimmering red color. "and why is it here?" Danny asked, walking forword to stand with luka."oh because were going to ride her to england," she replied cheerfully.
Chapter 2 Well you could say that the ride there was eventful. Considering Danny found a way to ride the dragon tail like a surfboard. When they arrived in England the dragon touched down with a thud. Then she flipped her tail and sent danny catapulting in the air. "Flemeth!" luka cried in annoyence. On his way down though danny put his hand out in front of him and pushed the air around his body in front of him to create a slowing fall. As he landed he said "I think I'll call that move feather fall." "Cool. Now let's go come on we are going to be late," luka said, speeding down the sidewalk. "Out of my way!" she yelled at the people in front of her. "sheesh," danny muttered as he followed her to the contact for the mission. Once they reached the location where they were supposed to meet Danny immeadiatly knew something was wrong. The space around them felt like it was closing in. Well he put a stop to it soon enough. "Well,Well,Well look what the cat dragged in," said a cold voice.
"I know that voice. Mr.Eagle get out of your hiding place and speak face to face with us," luka shouted into the dark. Out of it stepped a man that looked as if he had stepped right out of a ad for a cruise. He had tosseled black hair and peircing blue eyes. He was wearing a hawaiin t-shirt and cream colored Bermuda shorts. "Why hello there luka. Long time no see," he said smileing a cold smile. It never reached his eyes. "Just so happens to be the way I like it," Luka shouted in reply as she wipped out her hand at him. Flames started burtsing from her palm, spreading across the distance between her and Mr.Eagle at lightning speed. He moved just in time to avoid most of the burn that would have happened. He looked at his right arm where he had been hit. It was red and welting. "Alright then no more playing," he said looking straight into Luka's eyes. He continues doing this for a few seconds then looks away and says "Luka darling why don't you do me a favor and take out the trash." Danzo looked at Luka with confusion. "What the h-," he started to say but was cut of by Luka as she stepped forward and turned around to face him. "As you wish Mr.Eagle," Luka said in a monotone. Her eyes had a glassy look to them. Then Danny realized what was happening. "Eagle you dog!" he lashed out. In return eagle smiled and said "I can't wait to see you smoking." Then Luka raised her hands above her head and a small ball of fire appeared and started getting bigger and bigger. "Danny get out of here run!" Luka screamed as she temporarily broke Eagles control. "Ah Luka you naughty child telling him what to do." Eagle scolded as he reasterted his control.
"No. I may tolarate being called short,nerdy,dork, and incredibly handsome. But you never call me trash," danny yelled as he flung three shurikens at Eagle. He spread his arms apart and slowed down time. He sprinted behind Eagle and put his katana to Eagles throut. He let time go back to normal. Eagle looked down at the sword in suprise. So much suprise that he let luka go. She collapsed to the ground as the fireball she had been forming snuffed out. "Move and I'll cut your throut," danny snarled pressing the katana closer to Eagle.