The Battleship.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Jun 18, 2012.

  1. Just watched Battleship today, and I absolutely thought it was boss. ;P For those who've seen it, put your paws up. XD Sorry it's so short!
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    She grunted, the sweat dripping off her forehead quickly as her body swayed with the ship.

    She screamed for Colonel Mick, whom was looking out to sea from the wooden deck.

    He stood, watching carefully over the waters.
    The sweat flew off her forehead as the wind beat against her face. She pulled her hat down carefully, holding a handled machine that was quiet light for its large size.

    "Sir!" she shouted, hauling, then saluting.
    "Ah, deckhand VonBurns."
    "S-Sir, you need to see this!" she stammered.
    "What is it?"

    "The training mission introduction will be starting soon."
    "Alright. Tell the Admiral I'll be there soon."
    "Yes sir." she saluted and bowed,
    running back to the battleship.
     
  2. awesome saucehewwo again bekka
     
  3. FUUU-Let this die, I totally fluffed it.
     
  4. Why?  it was awesome
     
  5. The beginning was messed up.