The Battle Of Centuries

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Steltz, May 13, 2012.

  1. Ok I wrote a paper about it in school so I have to get it first and then put it here, for now I'll try to remember it



    I rushed outside to the sound of my name. There they were, all my friends, family, but Kyle was missing. I frowned. "Where is Kyle?" I asked. "Surprise!!" I hear him yell from behind me. I give him a big hug. "So how's the party?" I ask Tim. "Not bad," he says, "We need entertainment." Just then the news comes on. The anchor says, "Breaking News, a Nuclear Bomb threat from Somalia, how will we react? More info coming up at 6." My mom started crying.
     
  2. Guess no one likes my story
     
  3. It's good make it longer and use paragraphs and more detail
     
  4. It's great but use paragraphs and if you want to make more chapters
     
  5. And u can use some adjective and other things