The Attack

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Orisel (01), Aug 13, 2012.

  1. On a hot morning, Selena, Zane and Joshua were hanging out near the local shop. It was an average day with cars flying past and lots of people talking. The friends sat down with a bag of crisps each and talked. On that night, Zane couldn't sleep because of the sound of screaming. Looking out of the window, he noticed why they were screaming. There was a man who looked drunk who was walking around, trying to bite people. Out of the front, he saw Josh walk over and get bitten. He then turned into one of them. Phoning Selena, she wouldn't answer. There was screaming coming from next door in Selena's house. Then the trouble started. Fleeing the house, his cousin John drove Zane away from the mess. It seemed like they were the last people alive.
    "where are we going John?" Asked Zane
    "to find survivors!" he answered as he drove near survivors.
    "coming in?" he asked them as they came in. They had weapons. Great weapons. Can they be trusted though?
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    Hope you enjoyed
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  2. Hmm good beginning
     
  3. Thanks 
     
  4. Keep goin
     
  5. Good start. Just remember to capitalize the dialogue, too!
     
  6. Will do.
    I will try and do another update
    Unless someone wants to collaborate?