the 300 orcs at thermoplsali

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *HULKiron (01), Mar 25, 2011.

  1. It was a dark day in the mountain pass 300 elite battle hardened orcs and 800 militia goblins led by their war chief Leo orgmalog held the pass as they saw billions of dark elfs swarming the landscape. In the center their king
     
  2. Xerxion smiled smugly surrounded by his 10000 Strong bodyguard. Throwing caution to the wind xerxion ordered the militia to charge the enemy even though he knew they had little hope of surviving
     
  3. They charged and did better than expected they took out 500 from the left side and 200 on their right. Leo's 2nd In command bor malog said "sire they are preparing to engage and have recovered from our charge!!! What do we do now?" Leo puffed out his chest and exclaimed " we hold our position while trying to push them out u stay in the back while il lead the charge" and raised his longsword. In a fury his orcs slammed through enemy ranks one after one ten after ten hundred after hundred the elves fell. In distress Xerxion engaged his bodyguard to hold the assault back. Fighting between the elite orcs and dark elf bodyguard went on until the bodyguard was defeated after seven days. A traitorous Orc told xerxion about a secret passage around the mountain so he could kill all the remaining orcs. Preparing fir battle at dawn Leo now saw he was surrounded on all sides their was only one option left... A balls out charge. During the charge Leo was struck with an arrow and died. Orcs surrounded the body and defended it well. The last orcs fell to arrows and dark elf forces one the day
     
  4. But they rose from the grave 2 days later to defend the capital of atheniagrom and pwned everything in sight
     
  5. This is based on the battle of thermopalie and the 300spartans
     
  6. The end๎€’๎ž๎€’
     
  7. Rate it below ten being best one being worse
     
  8. 7? Not bad... Not amazing... In comparison to the others. Expkain everything more
     
  9. Sweet a seven should I make more short stories based on historical things?
     
  10. CAN YOU STOP DOING THE GRAVE DIGGING?
     
  11. OHMYGOODNESS MORDICI YOU ARE SO RIGHT. Stop bumping old threadss!! Please!!
     
  12. I'm bumping history
     
  13. That's spamming forums you twit.