This is a story I've currently been working on <3 Hope you guys like it and if you don't could you tell me how to make it more interesting?? ----------------------------------------- Tears began to fall from her bright green eyes. She couldn't help but think what if she would have tried to at least find the good, controlled version of her best friend. Would he have done himself that way? The worst part of it all was that she let him. She could have stopped it or she should have at least tried! One month ago, she and her best friend, Tatum, was going to the national park for her birthday. Tatum was the love of her life. He also had green eyes, but they were a little darker. His hair was an auburn color. She sat staring at him with the smile she only wore on her face whenever Tatum was around. " Paige, did you know you're my best friend? " She looked even more longingly into his eyes as she began to speak. Her words formed before she could even think about them. " I know! I'm glad I met you. You're probably the most amazing friend ever! " He laughed, the wind repeating every sound. She loved to hear him laugh. He seemed to block out all the anger and desperation of the world leaving the tiniest glimpse of happiness in Paige's life. What would she do without him? No! She couldn't let herself think of something so horrible. Paige turned away looking out at the sky,wishing he would come to find out ,eventually, that she loved him.
---------------------------------------The sky was the color of calmness. Blue. Light - blue. She looked up at it as the wind blew through her long, thick hair. The color of it seemed to go perfectly in the weather, reflecting the rays of the sun. The leaves of the trees brushed against one another in a gentle way. She was taken by the beauty of it. It was perfect now that Tatum was with her. She couldn't help but smile when she looked at him staring into the sky as if he were looking for an answer. Paige stood there, right beside Tatum, staring at every detail of his face while he stared out in the distance. A smile was across her face while he looked so serious. The look on her face as she gazed at him left her looking as though she had diamonds in her eyes. He looked so beautiful to her. To her surprise, she felt him grab her hand and watched as his fingers thread themselves through them. When she looked back up at him, he was staring at her and repeated what he had said earlier.
What do y'all think so far?? I've got a lot more to the story but Id like to know if y'all like it so far first :]
In glad you guys like it!! ) P.s. I don't know how to make the awesomer smiley faces.... Heheh ----------------------------------------- How did he not know she loved him? It didn't matter. She wouldn't say anything to him. She couldn't. The sky was beginning to fade to a light pink color. There in the park she sat hand-in-hand with Tatum who'd always be her best friend. He had to be! The next day, Paige sat at home watching movies. Suddenly, her phone rang. " Hello? " she said. She didn't hear anything for a few seconds and then her friend, Carmen's, voice echoed through. " Paige! It's Tatum! He's been in an accident.. There was glass everywhere and so much blood. Paige, he almost died! " The phone fell from her hands as she collasped on the floor, tears streaming down her face. There she sat ,for what seemed like forever, rocking, shaking, unable to breathe. She began shivering and shuttering. " I almost lost him... I almost lost him..." she repeated. Finally, she began to move. ----------------------------------------- I think that you guys should know that this is a made up story about my best friend that I really do love... And some of the stuff in the story farther along probably has happened...
Thank you Party ----------------------------------------------- Finally, she began to move. She got up, grabbed her keys, and ran out the door. She was on her way to the hospital, driving as fast as she could. Trees looked like globs of paint thrown out into the sky. The world seemed to spin in four different directions. Before she realized it, she had arrived at the hospital. Already out of the car,she scrambled toward the entrance with tears still flooding her eyes. She found her way inside and had just enough composure to ask the lady at the desk where Tatum was. She turned and ran while the lady was still trying to tell her the number and floor. She ran around corners and avoided running into people. Suddenly, she didn't care. She had to get there. She had to see him. When she reached the floor, she searched desperately for the room with the number 247. As soon as she saw it, her heart felt as though it would explode. The now colorless door seemed to weigh a ton. She just looked at it. Just as she reached out to open it, she fell to the ground. No! She had to stay strong enough for him. She couldn't let him see how scared she was. She got up, forced the tears away, and opened the door.
" Paige? " She heard his voice call. When she walked around to find him, she saw his family surrounding him.That's when it hit her. He wasn't calling out to her, he was asking who she was. Just as that happened, she closed her eyes and held her breath. Suddenly, everything seemed blank. Her head was spinning and then ,out of nowhere, every part of her crashed. She couldn't breathe, her eyes refused to open, she couldn't speak, she could barely move. When she opened her eyes again, she was at home on her unusually bright orange couch. " It was just a dream. That's all. Calm down. " She picked up her phone, dialed the number, and waited. " Hey Tatum, I was wondering if you wanted to hang out today. " After about ten minutes, she was off the phone and in the shower. She was getting ready to meet him. She dried her hair, straightened it, and brushed through it one more time.