That Boy ~ Love Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DemiDemi2, Nov 22, 2014.

  1. Hello. ^~^ I've been thinking and I've decided to write a whole new story, and forget about my other one. This one will be a LOVE story. :eek: *dramatic Music* So um yeah. I hope you enjoy this story, and if you do, please bump it and give me suggestions of what to write next and such .. Okay, here goes!!
    note to myself - size = 180
    The cities may or may not be real, I just came up with them? XD

    --------------This Story WILL Have Mature Scenes Later In the Story -----------

    [/size=180] Chapter 1 - Introduction [/size]

    Hi! My name is Analisa, but you can call me Ana, or Lisa. I'm 16 years old, and I live in Charleston, Missouri. I have long, curly brown, amber hair, which cuts off at about my shoulder blades. I have grey eyes, with a hint of blue and green. I stand at around 5'6", and I have a pretty slim body, but I'm curvy. I'm a pretty shy person, but when you get to know me, I'm really nice.

    I have a deep, dark secret, that I don't tell anyone, ever...

    --November--
    Ana's P.O.V.
    The blinds suddenly rise, the sun bursting into my room, brightening it immediately. I quickly turned away from the window to face the wall, covering my face with my pillow as I groan.

    "Ana, wake your lazy ass up, RIGHT now."

    My mothers voice pierces the air, nearly bursting millions of holes into my pillow as it tries to reach me. I groan once more before finally sitting up.

    "Ma, what time is -- "

    I begin to speak, before I realize she's already walked out of the room.

    "Fucking bitch."

    I mumble, hoping she's not in ears shot. I rub my face, wincing slightly as my hand reaches my cheek. I throw my blankets off of me and stand up before walking into my bathroom, and look into the mirror, seeing a bruise in the shape of a hand, lying across my face. I sigh, and wince once more as I gently touch it, remembering last night....

    --Flashback of the Night Before--

    "Why can't you ever be home before 7:00?!"

    My mothers voice loud enough for the neighbors to hear, I try to calm her down.

    "Ma, it's only 5 minutes after 7 o'clock! Please, calm down."

    "You KNOW I ALWAYS leave at 7:00, why can't you ever respect me!"

    I try to calm her once more, but it backfires and I burst.. "Maybe I would respect you more if you didn't leave just to do drugs and fuck strangers for money and MORE drugs!"

    She stared at me before screaming, then finally slapping me across my face.

    "YOU FUCKING BITCH"

    --End Flashback--

    I frown and shut the bathroom door, and take off my clothes, turning on the shower as I climb in and turn on my radio.
    I leaned my forehead against the bathroom wall, letting my arms dangle, and letting the water fall down my back, giving my back a tickley massage.

    After about 10 minutes I climb out of the shower, dry off, and wrap my self with my towel as I walk back into my bedroom, grabbing my favorite outfit.
    An oversized, crochet, cream colored sweater, a matching under shirt, my light blue denim distressed shorts, cream colored knee-high socks, and my black converse.
    I brush my teeth quickly, finally running downstairs to the kitchen.
    "Bye, Ma."
    I grab my purse and my backpack, before going outside.
    "Thank God I live next to Starbucks."
    I laugh a bit to myself and go inside, grabbing a cinnamon twist and coffee. I pay, then begin walking to school.

    As I cross the road, and yes, I checked both ways, twice, a big as fuck truck zooms past a stop sign, nearly hitting me, I quickly jump out of the way. Thankfully, I didn't drop my breakfast.
    The driver stops and runs out of his car, running over to me. I freeze and think to myself.
    "Damn he's cute...."

    "oh my God, I'm so sorry, I'm in a hurry to get to class, are you okay?!"
    His voice is so soothing, he's so cute when he panics.

    "I'm fine..."

    He laughed , I blinked a few times when I realized he was laughing at me staring.

    "I'm Danny."



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    I hope you like my story so far!!!
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    ~Demi
     
  2. Nice Demi please update! ^ω^
     
  3. Chapter 2

    I smile at him and try to speak, my voice barely above a whisper.

    "My name is Analisa."

    He smiles back, blushing a bit.

    "A beautiful name for a beautiful girl.."

    He winked as he walked back to his truck, not allowing me to get the last word. He looked 17 or 18. His deep brown eyes staring into my eyes made my body melt, I'm surprised I didn't melt for real.
    His hair was a dirty blonde color, and he had freckles. God, those freckles... He was much taller than me, at least 6", and I could tell he had somewhat of a build.
    I began walking to school again, and once I finally reach it, I'm done with my cinnamon twist.
    The bell rang the moment I got there. I checked my phone for the rime.

    "Shit!!"

    I ran to the office to get a late pass, and dropped my things off at my locker, and went to my first period class.
    When I walked into the room, everyone stared. They started whispering.

    "Ana's never late.."
    "She must be a bad girl now"

    I handed the teacher my pass, thankfully she was in a good mood
    That's a first.
    The only seat left was in the far back. What us kids call the slut corner, since only whores sit back there. I sighed and sat down, opening my sketch book.
    After about 30 minutes of class, with only 10 minutes left.... None other than Danny the Hottie walks in. You can here all the girls gasping at his appearance, entranced at his good looks.
    He sees me and smiles as I quickly turn my head down to my drawing. He walks to the back, seeing as there's one seat next to me.

    "great, just my luck. Mr cutie has to sit next to me"

    He smiles at me again, and looks at my drawing. His voice makes me melt again.

    "That's a wonderful drawing. Who is it?"

    I freeze, my pencil stops moving and I look at him, then at my paper.

    "Uhm, it's just a random person."

    He nods, looking up at the teacher as she begins telling us the homework assignment. I'm in deep drawing, so I don't pay attention.
    The bell finally rings and I gather up my stuff, beginning to walk out as Danny walks behind me.

    "do you want to be my partner?"

    My eyes widen and I freeze... Again.. I look up at him.

    "huh?"

    He laughs.

    "My partner for the project..."

    "what project?"

    "the one the teacher just gave us. I can explain it more if you'd like to be my partner."

    I smile and nod.

    "let's go to my place after school?"

    As he says that my heart pounds faster.

    Me? Go to HIS house? Duh.
     
  4. Nice! More updates plz! ^ω^
     
  5. I'm glad you like the story so far
     
  6. Im wondering why no one is reading it other than me
     
  7. Bleh I dunno :(
     
  8. Omg update pleasee nice storyy
     
  9. Update soon
     
  10. Please update!!!!!!
     
  11. Plz update u r amazing wall me when u update xxxxxxx
     
  12. HI EVERYONE. ITS THE AUTHOR ON A NEW ACCOUNT. YES. I WAS PERM BANNED IDK WHY.. SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS STORY?
     
  13. Update please 
     
  14. Update? 
     
  15. Plzzzz carry on xx
     
  16. Chapter 3


    I smile to myself, walking to my locker. I can't believe it! First of all, he goes to my school. Second, he wants to be MY partner in a project?! I wasn't paying any attention when the teacher was explaining things, but he said he'd tell me what's going on. I shut my locker and turn, jumping slightly.

    "Analisa. God, I still can't get over how wonderfully your name goes with your beautiful self."

    He smiles, making me blush even more than I already was by his comment. I just stood there like a doofus, probably smiling like a donkey. I hear him chuckle, snapping me back into reality.

    "Oh, I um.. Sorry. I got distracted"

    I smile nervously and he lifts my hand, his soft lips grazing my knuckles.

    "It's okay, darling. Meet me right here after school, then we shall go to my house."

    I nod, giggling like a little girl. Before I can respond, he winks and walks off.
    I walk to my class, then my next, and the next, and so on, not focused at all. I just can't stop myself from thinking about his dreamy eyes and voice. The bell rings, making me jump. I gather my things together and scurry to my locker, blushing when I see he's already there. I walk up to him and he gives me a kind smile.

    "There you are, Analisa. Would you like to grab some food or something before we go to my house?"

    I smile and nod, following him out to his car. I can tell that a journey awaits me.




    Sorry for the short update I was in a hurry. Next one will be better!
     
  17. Cool
    looking forward to the next update.
     
  18. Love it plz wall me when u update again xxx
     
  19. Update please!!! Wall me