Tear of Every Drop of Rain

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by RaychelElla, Jan 22, 2012.

  1. "A tear for every drop of rain".

    It's was fourth year that Caleb been dead. I was drinking my fifth beer. I really loved the guy.

    I looked at myself in the mirror. My black mascara was wet and was scattered all over my face. "Brooke you shouldn't be like this".said my best friend Ava.

    "I don't care. It doesn't matter anymore."bluntly said by Brooke. "You know Caleb wouldn't want you to be like this".she said.

    Thing is I've regret every single guy who tried to ask out me. I really miss Caleb. I loved him. Senior year is not suppose to be fun.
     
  2. Love it! Very good! ᏰᏌᎷᎵ!!! 
     
  3. "Good morning class of East Mist High, I'm your teacher Mrs. Jolly.

    I was sitting in the back row of course."Hey Ted Tanner". You know the quarterback of EMS.

    I rolled my eyes. "Whatever I know who are you. "You do"?he asked. I nodded. "So then who are you"?Ted ask again. "I'm Brooke". I said.

    "Well Brooke I'm very glad to be your history partner." Ted was smiling." Hmm please don't your staying". Brooke said. "That's the spirit."he said.

    "Oh Teddy bear".whined Ariana. Oh god here barbie. I'm not kidding she actually looks like barbie.

    After a few minutes talking to Ted she whispered to me. " Stay away from my Ted or else". Then she just away with clicking noises of her Gucci plumps.
     
  4. I can feel the sadness of Brooke. :(
    This has potential.
    BUMP! :)
     
  5. ᏰᏌᎷᎵ my dear!!! 
     
  6. Buumpppoooo
     
  7. Walking down the hall alone as usual. Sadly Ava goes to a different school.

    I don't what it is but I've felt different. Was it my new black tattoo of butterfly. Or my newly scars. I felt tap my shoulder. It was Ted.

    I was actually glad to see him."I was wondering if you know to start the history project at my place"?he asked.

    A smile was forming on my face. " Sure why not. I was thinking we should Egypt."I said. "Wow. You totally read my mind.he said "So what time". "Around 4:30 you know after the football practice."Later"I said.

    "Miss Williamson, I hope there's nothing that could cause serious damage in that drink of yours." This was snobby principal."Of course not unless you think I'm drinking". I was now frowning. "May I"?she said. "With pleasure".I said jokingly.

    She sniff it . "Hmm okay. Very on don't be lingered around the halls again."she said while handing my cup of coffee.

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    Is it really good?
     
  8. Bump!!! And I love it 
     
  9. Awh thanks I'll update first thing in the morning at 6
     
  10. Yaaayy!! 
     
  11. Lol sorry I wasn't able to msg u. I got silenced 
     
  12. Oh mah god! What for! 
     
  13. YAAAAYYYY!!! YOU'RE BAAACCKK!!!  now update 
     
  14. Yes I will 