Super Hero Agency-Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by alyscn, Jul 4, 2015.

  1. I walked down the street, The smell of cookies fills in with the cold breeze of winter.

    "Can we go already?" Jan asked.

    "Im not yet done taking a quick stroll," I replied.

    "You're riding a car," Leo says.

    "My car!" I exclaim.

    "We still need to go to the university right?" Leah asks.

    "Yeah, to maintain a good vacation, and watch out for those mistletoes," Jan laughs.

    "Heh, do people really kiss under the mistletoe?" I ask.

    Everybody looks at me.

    "Umm, yes!" Leah screams."I'll be kissing Alfie tomorrow!" She adds.

    "Umm He is with Zoe," I say.

    "Josh-" She says.

    "Colleen," I say.

    "Julie-,"

    " He is with Jenna!" I say angrily.

    "Oh come on, I never get kissed," Leah complains.

    "Whatever, I never get kissed too," I say.

    "We're here too!" Leo and Jan shouts.

    We arrive at the university.

    "We're here!"

    "Yahoo!" They say angrily.

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  2. *I come in a shoot everyone * everyone dies THE END
     
  3. ^ :lol: :lol: and then i shoot you ?
     
  4. The story is a little hard to follow… try proofreading.