Summer in a Castle by Accident

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_____MoonysFlower_____ (01), Mar 4, 2012.

  1. "Hello, this is station 84.8 and may I ask your name and state?"

    OMG. I might actually win this ticket to England!!!

    "Um, my name is Angelique and I live in Maryland."

    "Alright, Angel, when is the next leap year? Answer this correctly and you will win a free ticket to London, England!"

    My jaw dropped. Seriously? That was such an easy question! I am so lucky!

    "Since leap year happens every four years, and this year is 2012, so the next leap year will be in 2016?" I squeezed my eyes shut hoping that for some unknown reason that that wasn't going to be a wrong answer.

    "Weelllll...." Nooo!! Of course I had to screw up an easy question like that!

    "That's right!" I practically shrieked! Yes yes yes yes!

    "We are hooking you up to a private line for more information on your plane ticket, please stay connected, Angel."

    Watch out, England! Angelique Bobbi Connors is coming for yah!
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    So.. How'd you like it? Please comment if I should continue! 
     
  2. It's good! Calm into. But...couple more details next time?  and show, don't tell?  am I hated? The story is good though... So far
     
  3. Thanks! Lots of people tell me more show not tell. No hard feelings. Gran-gran. 
     
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    Goody!