story idea

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eric___ (01), Jun 14, 2012.

  1. I'm thinking of writing this story I'm not sure though I want you guys to decide tell me what you think
    Chakushoku sa Rita Kuni
    Long ago the there was a race for power and land and the nations knew that they must form alliances so the Ao, the Aka, the Pinku, the Midori, the Kirro, the Gure, And the Shiro. But we will be focusing on a boy named Hiro from the Ao nation he is an orphan he lives with his grandfather kashikoi, he has two brothers a younger one called Wakai and an older one called Akuryo. Akuryo had joined the war and had gone Missing in action after five years of being in war. So Hiro sets off on a quest to find his missing brother
     
  2. Needs more of a base story line