Starting Over

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mrs_Nellie_Lovett, Feb 4, 2012.

  1. I was so nervous of being sent away from my orphanage. I was in my room, brushing my blond shoulder length hair, until I heard a knock. I gasped, "Come in," I said calmly. The door opened and in came mean old Mrs. Simons. "Eugh," she said in disgust. "You are 16. Act and dress like it.",She said with one of those grow up looks... "Yes ma'am.", I said.
    So, I went in my closet, put on my jeans and purple tank top, put my glasses on, grabbed my things, and walked out of my room. As I was walking out, I ran into my best friend Julie. "So-Sophie... Where are you going?! You can't leave!", she said, holding back tears. "I'm sorry, Julie... I'm moving in with my Aunt Mary.", I said sadly. "Oh...", she said. You could hear her soft Italian accent. Her green eyes started to tear up and I pushed her straight black hair out of her face. "I'll write to you everyday. I'll miss you bunches!", I said. "You better. I'll miss you millions.", she said back to me. Just then we heard a knock on the door. "Bus is here!", came a muffled voice from outside. We both started crying and gave each other bear hugs. "Sophia Marie Carter! The bus is waiting!", called Mrs. Simons. "Good bye, Julie..." "Bye... Sophie-Dophie." We both let out a giggle. I turned around to wave, but the giant oak doors were already shut. "You coming young Miss?", asked the bus driver. I snapped out of my mind and walked on to the bus. England. I'm going to England. From Chicago to England. Good thing this is a private bus, cause I snore in my sleep. Here goes nothin'. England here I come!

    Later
    "....iss! Miss!", I heard the bus driver yelling. "We're at the harbor.", he said smiling. "Okay. Thank you." I gave him a tip and got off the bus. I looked for my boat and I finally saw it. S.S Player[\i] Ew. I'm kind of scared. I'm a girl. I walked on to the boat and saw a couple young guys drinking and messing with girls. I saw this one boy, about my age, sitting in the back, auburn hair, and hazel eyes. He looked scared. "Are you okay?", I asked him. "Yeah.", he said. "Good. I'm Sophie. Who are you?" "I'm Francis. Francis Jones. Where are you headed off to?" "England. London, to be specific." "Really? Me too.", said another boy at the table. He was one of them. Dirty blond hair, brown eyes, and buff. "Cool. How about you, Francis? Are you going too?", I asked him. "Yeah. He's my older brother, I have too.", he said it like he wasn't happy about that. I laid back and closed my eyes.

    Even Later[\i]
    I woke up to the sound of laughing. I saw Francis and his brother laughing at me. "What?", I asked. "You snore really loud.", They both said. I blushed. I ignored them, and stepped outside the boat. "Wow.", I said. London sure is big. "Cool, right?", asked Francis' brother. "Yeah. What's your name anyway?", I asked "Rick."
    "Ah.", I said. Francis pointed to a huge school. "That's Reviyard High School.", he said. "That's the school we'll be going to?", I asked in disbelief. "Yep. Get ready for tomorrow. It's your first day, and it can be pretty crazy.", said Rick. Shit, I thought. Crazy... Now, I need to find Aunt Mary...
     
  2. OMG! Italic didn't work. Pretend it's in italic...lawl
     
  3. Wow amazing


    LOVE IT NELLIE BUMP!
     
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