Start of Something Good

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  1. My name is Peyton. Peyton Alexander McGee but everybody usually calls me Peyt. I'm 6 feet tall with medium length brown hair(that needs to be cut soon) and blue eyes. I'm 17 and on the varsity track, soccer, and baseball team.
    I have a younger brother, Zackary Garrett McGee but we just call him Garrett, who is also on the varsity track, soccer, and baseball team and he's only 16. Like me, he has medium length brown hair, but his is a little lighter and he has brown eyes. He takes more after dad with eye color but I get more and more like my dad everyday according to my mom. Garrett is 5-9 but he's steadily getting taller.
    Then there's my baby sister. Brianna Ainsley McGee. Brianna and Garrett are twins which I think is pretty beast. Brianna is on the girls varsity soccer and track team and the varsity tennis team. Brianna is 5-5 and she has blonde hair and blue eyes just like mom and she has guys wanting to date her. Ugh. When will they realize when it comes to my family they are stepping into my world. It's my job to protect my baby sister at all times even if it means giving up on dating for a while.

    Now for my parents. My mom is Holly McGee and she is the absolute greatest. I couldn't ask for a better mom. She has blonde hair and blue eyes and she's about 5-4 but I love my mom. My mom and dad have been married for 17 years and I swear they still act like two lovestruck teenagers.
    Then there's my dad, Zack McGee. He's about 5-8 maybe 5-9 and he has brown hair and brown eyes. My dad and I butt heads a lot. Mom says it's because we are so much alike but I think that he's just trying to control me but hey he loves mom and us and I know he would do anything for us.
     
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    TELL ME THE STORY PLEASE
     
  3. Peyton is all growed up now so sad lol
     
  4. IYOUR STORIES
     
  5. Humm was I hit by a bus/ mauled by a
    Tiger?
     
  6. Ooohh yippy!!BUMP BUMPITU^^ cant wait for the update.continue pls XD
     
  7. Ok guys update lol after this update I will be going into different point of views. I'm just giving a little background info so enjoy



    My family is pretty well off. My mom is a physical therapist and my dad is in the army.
    Since my dad is in the army we have to move around a lot. We've lived in North Carolina, Texas, Montana, California, Florida, Missouri, Louisiana, Georgia, Michigan, Pennsylvania, and of course Mississippi.
    Living in Mississippi is great for me. I've managed to become the best baseball player at Neshoba in the three years I've been here and gotten the most beautiful girlfriend, Katherine Michelle Timmons, ever. Kate and I have been together for two years well it will be tomorrow. I met her on my first day at Neshoba my freshman year and I knew she was the one I wanted to be with. In three months I had gotten to know her well enough to ask her and I did. Our first date was horseback riding. Yeah I know horseback riding really?
    Well Kate liked horseback riding and we own a lot of horses so why not. We had a great time together and of course we kept seeing each other.

    Tomorrow I plan on giving Kate the promise ring that she picked out but what I didn't know is that tomorrow would also be the day that my whole world would be turned upside down.
     
  8. BUMP^^ yeehaa another update
     
  9. bump!!!!!! 




     
  10. Will update today in Kate's point of view
     
  11. Flip snack!!!!!!'n
     
  12. Ok this is gonna be the longest update ever lol I hope y'all enjoy it:)





    Kate's point of view:

    Two years today. Two years today when I became Peyton's girlfriend. He still gave me chills when he just simply touched my hand. I smiled at the thought. He was so amazing.
    I sighed and started getting ready for school. School was so boring. If we are supposed to go to school to learn then why do only like 8 teachers out of like 30 only teach. This is why I didn't want to go to school but the upside of going meant I got to see Peyton. I still remember when we first met.

    *~*~*~*~*~*FLASHBACK*~*~*~*~*~*

    Freshman year....joy. Only three more years and I can get out of this godforsaken h*ll hole.
    It was 7th period and I was continuously looking at the clock. I was ready to go home and relax but I had cheer practice after school. I was still in my little daze when he walked in the room.
    At that moment every girl in the room sat up straighter and stared at this beautiful guy who just walked in. The teacher, Mrs. Weir, talked to him for a couple of minutes and said,"Class we have a new student," she turned to him and said,"Why don't you tell us a little bit about yourself?"
    He cleared his throat and said,"Well my name is Peyton Alexander McGee but everybody usually calls me Peyton or Peyt. I run track and play soccer and baseball and I just moved back here from North Carolina. My dad is in the army so we move around a lot."
    Mrs. Weir nodded and said,"Well Peyton you can take a seat beside miss Kate."
    Mrs. Weir pointed me out and he nodded and came over and sat beside me and smiled and said,"Hey I'm Peyton."
    I smiled back and said,"I'm Kate."
    He smiled again and said,"That's a beautiful name. Of course it would have to be for such a beautiful girl."
    I could feel my cheeks getting hot and I said,"Thank you."
    He smiled and winked at me and said,"You're welcome Kate. Hopefully I'll be seeing a lot."
    I nodded, still blushing madly and said,"I'd like that."

    *~*~*~*END FLASHBACK*~*~*~*

    I sighed but it was a happy sigh and started getting ready for school. Peyton always told me the things he liked best about me were my dark brown eyes, my dark brown hair, my "bubbly" personality as he put it, and my attitude.
    I was much shorter than Peyton. I am 5-5 and I have dark brown hair and dark brown eyes. I'm not afraid to voice my own opinion and if I'm dating you I will love you with everything I have. I run track and play tennis. I used to be a cheerleader but I decided to not do it anymore because of too much drama.
    I looked at the clock. Holy sh*t I was gonna be late if I didn't hurry. I quickly did my makeup and put on some dark blue skinny jeans, a tight fitting short-sleeved black shirt with a blue spaghetti strap shirt on top, some black ballet flats, silver earrings, Peyton's class ring, and a silver necklace that Peyton bought me last year that says 'forever in love' on the back.
    I did a quick check in the mirror and smiled. Today was gonna be amazing. I quickly grabbed my NorthFace backpack and my purse and my NorthFace windjacket and got in my car.
    I drove between 60 and 70 the whole way trying to not be late for school so I could spend a few minutes with Peyton this morning before the bell rang. I finally got to school at 7:45 and Peyton was in his car waiting for me. I smiled he was the absolute greatest guy in the world.
    I pulled in the parking spot beside him and honked my horn and he sat and smiled when he saw me. He got out of his car and got his backpack and got in my car and kissed me and said,"Goodmorning sweetie. Happy two year anniversary."
    I blushed madly and said,"Goodmorning to you too. Happy two year anniversary to you too Peyt."

    We stayed in my car for a couple more minutes and we finally got out. Peyton got my stuff for me and held it while I made sure that everything was good. I took my stuff from him and said,"Thank you Peyton."
    He smiled and said,"You know I'd do anything for you."
    I smiled and blushed again. He took my hand and we walked to the school building laughing and talking and smiling. We got to my first period and he looked me in the eyes and said,"I love you Katherine Michelle Timmons and don't you ever forget that."
    I blushed and said,"I love you too Peyton Alexander McGee and don't you ever forget that either."
    He smiled and said,"I'd never forget something like that."
    He leaned down and kissed my cheek and winked at me and said,"Don't miss me too much Kate."
    I rolled my eyes and kissed his cheek and said,"Shouldn't I be saying that to you?"
    He laughed and said,"I guess you should."
    He kissed me again and waited until I was in my classroom until he went to his.
    I sat in my seat and sighed. He really was the sweetest guy ever.
     
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