It was 10 o clock pm and I was at a party. Everyone was drinking accept for me. My best friend Alicia is crazy bur I love her. She invited my crush.... Cullen one of the most amazing guys in my school. My name is Harley.... Yes like the motercycle. So anyways me and Cullen are dancing together just having fun. The beat just brought us together I guess. " EVERYONE IT'S TIME FOR SPIN THE BOTTLE" alicia yells Cullen grabs my hand and takes me over to where we are playing "ok Harley you go first" "umm o-ok" I spin the bottle and it lands on....
Except** But** Motorcycle** Also numerous punctuation mistakes and run ons, I'm not hating, just correcting
It landed on this guy Carter.... My ex boyfriend. "Ooooooo" Everyone gets quiet. Carter looks at me and smiles, Then winks "Carter go kiss her" People tell him I can see Cullen tightening his jaw and clenching his fists together. Carter comes up to me, and has me sits next to me. I look down at the ground. He lifts up my head with his hand and looks me in te eyes. He leans in and right when we were about to kiss Cullen looses it, he pushes Carter away from me and punches Carter in the face. Carter throws a punch back and misses...I get up to stop them, Alicia grabs Carter, and I grab Cullen, I bring him to a bench and talk to him. " Are you okay?" " Yeag " Why did you punch him... I mean I'm glad you got me out of kissing him, but why?" " somthing just came over me" " oh I-" Cullen cuts me off, and before I know it he is kissing me, and I let him.