spilt personalitys

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Whateva_ (01), Oct 11, 2012.

  1. Does anyone know in Greek mythology how there's many gods? Well I have a theory that it's just god in split personality's I'll start my story about it soon
     
  2. Split
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    Gods POV
    ".....Another station another mile!!!!!" stop listening to that crap Ares it's crap.....I won't Zeus you can't make me....... Shut up guys I'm trying to invent a structure no one can ever think of building!......... Oh shut up Athena no one cares!


    Tom's POV

    Back and forward back and forward god really seems to be Athena more then anything it does help humans but Jesus one personality would be Really nice!

    Oh I forgot I'm an angel and I am gods ( if you could call him that's) personal advisor so I have seen all his personality's and my favorite his athena( don't hurt me Aphrodite personality!) well anyways god is having an argument with himself (kinda weird looking) but I still got to watch
     
  3. Good but some tips to help:
    •Make updates longer.
    •Use full stops.
    •Use speech marks and a line in between each speech to make it clearer.
    •Be more descriptive so you can picture the scene.
    •Proof read.A few grammar mistakes...