Sorry

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *keena_is_back (01), Jun 22, 2011.

  1. Another poem...

    Her name was Sorry.
    Broken White
    Spoken night
    Skin colour of yellowing street light
    Year gone, 50.
    She was a hard woman
    Thin as the friendships
    On her council estate
    Cold as the corner
    She waited on
    Chasing dragons and supping super tenants until late
    Birds scribbled 'sorry' across the concrete skies
    As Sorry stumble mumbled by
    Badly dressed
    But her smile, always neatly pressed

    She is the moment just before you lie

    Her heart beat
    Was the sound of running feet
    Skin tattoo blue smear
    In text she could hardly decipher
    When you have never met love
    It is hard to recognise fear
    She is the small print that none of us read
    But she believed
    In goodness and slim justice

    And just needed one more drink
    Maybe a witness
    And she would do this
    In some blocks
    It is hard to find the beat in the heart
    Thought it was a car back firing
    A lone boy on the roads Clap! Clap!
    Her laugh
    The sound of car alarms and police sirens

    Sorry dies years before they buried her.
    Some people just keep walking
    Smiling
    Hoping
    All the time
    Sorry carries her own coffin
    Made from White skin
    And long days in
    Squalid before the television screen

    And when the door knocked
    Like war drums
    Like windows catching birds
    She thought it was the thin beat of her heart she heard
    Opened the door
    And there he stood
    The Man of Blood
    She was so lonely
    She thought it was love

    Even when
    He pulled her teeth down
    Like the tower blocks on the edge of town
    She thought it was love
    Even when he gave her bouquets of bruises
    And chocolate boxes of excuses
    She thought it was love
    Even when he dragged her by the hair
    Like she was a weight he needed to get rid of
    She thought it was love
    And
    She was sorry
    That she made him hurt her
    Sorry that she made him curse her
    This is a true story
    Started with hope and humanity
    Ended with murder

    He broke her neck
    Snapped
    Like the pencil he refused to use at school
    Snapped
    Like a broken film reel
    Her life stuttered and flickered
    And spooled to the ground
    When she was found
    They say she did not male a sound

    Except
    Sorry.

    Well.
    We walk for days on streets of closer curtains
    And I am certain
    That you heard the same thing as me
    A scream like a siren
    A car back firing
    Then
    Silence.

    Sorry
    This is your obutuary
    Your epitaph

    A life locked behind thin white Walls
    Where you can hear strangers breathe
    Now set free
    RIP
    These sorrowful hopeful women
    Rest in Poetry
    Rest in Poetry
     
  2. Buena trabajo Chica! In spainish it means greatwork kiddo!
     
  3. Thanks, it's actually my mates poem.
     
  4. Np sweetheart. Keena if you need help or need to talk to someone call me,okay
     
  5. Awwh thanks, sure will keep that in mind 
     
  6. I actually really like this poem, it's amazing. :3
     
  7. Same, that's why I posted it 