Chapter 1 This night he needed sleep, that's all he wanted, but after yesterday it was risky. *yesterday evening* "MUM!! I need to get in the bathroom!" Tyler schreeched into the pail white door which was bolted, with a reply almost screamed " shudn't you be asleep Tyler?!". Tyler's eyes rolled "I'm 15 mum! You can't tell me when to sleep" the second reply more stern than the last "just because you have nightmares is no excuse for not sleeping!". It was true tyler had always had night-terrors , he was always so ashamed of them but they just kept coming, each more morbid than the last, he never slept more than 6hours anymore. Tyler stormed into his bedroom with the floorboards almost breaking below and he slid under his neon coloured covers ,"get your head straight Tyler.J.Anderson" he whispered sarcastically to himself, and off he ventured into the deep abyss of his sleep. (new story guys) opening chapter , I appreciate comments below , and even ideas, just pm me :lol:
You want in? I'll try, but it's hard to add characters into this one. Im already starting my third chapter.
Chapter 2 *This morning* "AHHHH!!!" a scream echoed through the hollow house while murdering all other sounds around. Tyler's mum bolted up the stairs and forced the door open. It was 6am and she has woken up the hour earlier to get ready. The door almost buckled under the pressure flying backwards, she stared at the sight of Tyler emerged from his bed with his hands open palmed with a red liquid on them. Her first thought was he had overreacted and spilt his drink , but then she saw the orange colored drink peaceful and undisturbed on the floor. She shivered through her body a cold chill as she realized a possibility, it was blood. She inspected all of the almost frozen figure she called her son for any injurys, but there was none, the blood had just,appeared. But nobody else could have been here , it simply wasn't possible... I hope you like my story it is sorta a thriller, not scary really , but it has it's moments... I wuv feedback guys so gimme =P
Chapter 3 *Breakfast* It was all cleaned up, Tyler and his Mum were in silence eating coco pops , his silver spoon crunching on the tiny things but not one did he move to his mouth, he was in shock. He knew pretty soon she would ask the inevitable question which he though he had an idea to answering "where did the blood come from?" and as if de'ja'vu she asked. He didn't respond at first , but it was no use , she was waiting. He shot out a mumble of words to try and form a sentence "my dreams.. I held her In my arms.. It got her" his Mum's face completely puzzled. "It's just a dream hunny, I don't understand where IT came from, but it wasn't from your dreams." Tyler kept repeating that in his head, he wanted to believe it so bad , but he had seen his best friend run at him screaming telling him he needed to wake up and then she had fallen into his arms and the next thing he had remembered was waking up with blood all over his hands. Tyler shook at the thought again , and he slowly picked up the blackberry curve in his pocket and phoned her... I'm rushing story forward 'cos I can't write for a while after this...