So I've been a bit out of it and was thinking of quitting writing but I didnt so I decided i'd post this here and um well write in a completely different genre to see what others think of it please comment or critique thank you! (>^_^)><(^_^<) Entry #1 I still don't know what happened. My veins turned a blood red, and my eyes bulged widened from, pain, anger, and frustration. After that game I've been undergoing therapy. From time to time I get to write down what I can't say, how I feel. Like a book, you know? I sign and date my name, and all guess it's like a report then. I don't have time for these things honestly, but even though I physically recovered...mostly I did not physiologically recover from my 'incident'.My body and mind will still react. Heh, don't want that do we? Well, I guess that's it for stupid entry one...just the rest of them to go. Dated: April 14,2010 Signed by: Christopher Entry #2 It's stupid how the guys on the team laugh at me. With their snooty remarks smart mouths. and wish I could just snap back and crush em'! It's also dumb to do that, if i did i'd be just like em'. I may not be 'normal', but I'm at least smart enough to know this. I sit there on the bench everyday thinking, "when will coach put me in?" I guess it's because he's uneasy about it. I don't blame him I guess coach Gregor is still a bit hesitant, fine by me. I'd just sit the looking at my surroundings. Heat scorching us affecting all our plays, the dust filled the air and the field atmosphere thick, then in the stands fathers would cheer for their sons. "Go Luke!" and "C'mon Josh!" I wonder what it feels like. I guess I'm too much of a disgrace for you dad. Well I guess that's it for today, I don't feel like writing. Dated: April 17,2010 Signed by: Christopher Entry #3 So there's my friend Emmer he has dyslexia, it makes it hard for him to learn. My friend Thalia is half deaf she wears a hearing aid, in case her situation gets worse the doc is making her learn sign language. It's painful watching the people you grew up around, and stuck by me like this. When we were kids it was all good then, nothing to really worry about. Now by them being around me they have to suffer ridicule. I'm always biting my lip telling myself those kids aren't worth it. Thalia and Emmer help me hold back. What can I do?! I don't know anymore can I protect my friends? Can I stop the bullying? Will I heal? Time goes by so slow, so slow. Dated: April 20, 2010 Signed by: Christopher
Cin it's good, nice and interesting concept for the story. A few grammatical errors but nice job. Looking for future updates!
Thanks guys hoping to attract more readers o__o~ Entry #4 Today was a strange day. No one said anything to me. Thalia was absent and Emmer was just as confused as me. Running my hand through my hair I walked home after school...baffled. Just to get jumped at the sidewalk on the corner of my house, it hurts. The pain from getting beat by others. School is almost over I just have to wait a bit longer. Dated: May 3, 2010 Signed by: Christopher Update #1 I often go to the therapist with Chris! I was absent today because I went to go talk to his therapist. He thinks Chris is doing well and that this bullying is a phase, but I'm still worried. He told me and Emmer to keep a journal too, and support Chris with words he couldn't say. I want Chris to be happy the way he was before this. Dated: May 3, 2010 Signed by: Thalia Jurnal #1 Thalia hasth jus caled me bout thisx jurnal we' suppused to kep forg Chris I dun lik thiz kids at schol I thunk Chris nees beter envirimet! Datd: Mae 33, 210 Snged be: Emmer Revised: Thalia has just called me about this journal we're supposed to keep for Chris I don't like these kids at school I think Chris needs a better environment. Dated: May 3, 2010 Signed by: Emmer Revised by: His mom (Note: Emmer has had Dyslexia since he was a kid, it's made it hard for him to learn to read and write. Since it's a bit difficult for him he often spells words wrong, but he understands what they mean and how to use them, his sentence structure is formidable and amazing for a child with dyslexia, but spelling seems to be where he needs a bit more help)
Lovely Cin, your Emmer is going to be sort of challenging to read but that's half the fun. Still wish for more detail but no biggie. Looking forward to updating.
It's getting more and more better! This way, we'll get to know the characters different circumstances. Keep up the good work, Cin~
Thank-you o_oif it weren't for the people that read, comment, and critique I wouldn't be writing right now. Entry #5 It hurts, coming home with a black eye. Having your parents bug and bug you about what happened. They go on and on, "What happened?!" "Are you ok?!" "Christopher Ronald Macin! You better explained what happened this instant!" Just ignore, just ignore. I would turn my head around, and place it lying on the wooden table softly crying my back turned to them. It was quiet, and a cold long night. Maybe talking to Thalia and Emmer would help me? I'll call them tomorrow morning, voices of friends always lift you up. Signed by: Christopher Dated: May 3,2010 Update #2 Chris called this morning, I didn't have my hearing aid on so I heard only heard a bit of our conversation. He spoke in a low tone sighing, huffing, and puffing I didn't know what to say to him. He seemed so, lost! I wish I coud help Chris but it seems I can't understand him the way I thought I could. It breaks your heart to see you're not as close to someone like you think huh? I stared out in frustration at my window, where was Emmer? Signed by: Thalia Dated: May 4,2010 Jurnal #2 I ovelsept tuday thali tuld mi abut thi dun convsaiton in the fone I ws lut! Sgned bi: Emmer Daed: Mae 4, 2134 Revised!: I overslept today Thalia told me about the conversation on the phone, I was lost! Signed by: Emmer Dated: May 4,2010 Revised by: His mom
Amazing Cin, Thalia is right it hurts like your inside a hurricane. Emmer is interesting to read with the spelling.
Sorry for updating a bit late I've been having a slow week and just couldn't think straight about this so it took me a while to get back in the swing! Thanks to everyone for readingI'm going to try really hard to get up there! Hopefully Entry #6 Things are new, a new day a new start right? That's the positive way that most of us think! But, sadly I don't. My dad cares about me yet hates the sight of baseball, figures he's the businessmen type. Keep your head in the books, and get an education time is money. I was talking to coach today he still doesn't want to put me in he's 'worried' the phone conversation online didn't make me feel better. This is all butt in the face. At least I get to hang with Emmer and Thalia we're going to see this new superhero themed movie, finally something normal yeah? Signed by: Chris Dated: May 8,2010 Update #3/ Jurnal #3 Again with the baseball! I know it's a 'mens' sport and all but really?! I talk to Chris again and all he was talking about was the phone conversation, we call it 'calling' since we have no phones and Emmer was involved this time this is like our phone conversations weird huh? Then again Chris can't...well yeah this is how it went down! I was secretly online even after I left the chat, it was so sweet what he did about us. BuddyChatz.Com Chris101: I swear Thalia one day my dad and coach will understand how I feel. GeekyThali13: I understand how you feel, but Chris maybe you shouldn't think about yourself all the time? System: Emmerson2.0 has joined the chat room Emmerson2.0: Hai gys! (System correction: Hi guys!) Emmerson2.0: Whca tlkin bout? (System correction: Whatcha talkin about?) GeekyThali13: The conversation that Chris had, and hey! Also Chris I'm being serious here. Chris101: I get you, but not being able to say these things pisses me off Emmerson2.0: CAM DWN! (System correction: CALM DOWN!) GeekyThali13: Yeah listen to Emmer! Chris101: You guys wouldn't understand not putting me in, it's the game I love! The sport I rave for! Emmerson2.0: Chris I my nt Bre sart ss yu bu I now yu wil ovurcemr tis! See yu ab te muves! I belive in Chris! (System correction: Chris I may not be as smart as you but I know you will overcome this! See you at the movies I believe in Chris!) System: Emmerson2.0 has left the chat room GeekyThali13: Me too Chris! Your our friend you will get past this! See you at the movies System: GeekyThali13 has left the chat room Chris101: Damn, they're my world...I wish I could tell them that myself infront of them... System: Chris101 has left the chat room System: BuddyChatz chat room 'secret' has been deleted Hope you enjoyed your chat It was conflicting emotionally to me and Emmer, but I guess no one saw ur relationships changing in the near future. Signed by: Thalia, and Emmer Dated: May 8,2010
Thanks guys sorry I was a bit slow posting that, but I will be updating soon, probably later tonight! If I'm lucky, and if you saw my typo there at the end it was meant to be our* not ur and earlier I said "what he did about us" near the opening of Thalia's update I meant "what he said about us" Just thought I'd correct those