Sick. Twisted. Disney.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Oct 7, 2012.

  1. Sick. Twisted. Disney.
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    By: Yours Truly, Gamzee.  :0)
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    Prologue: BlAcK mAgIc OvEr DISNEY.

    About two years ago, an Enchantress named Luna Cresent put a black magic spell all over the Disneyland Park.
    Now everything is black, deadly and killer.
    In each part of the park, the princesses from Disney have a companion or not, protecting their area.

    No one has dared to return, and one day, from Luna's sky throne, she sees a group of teens walk into the park, and drops a letter in front of them.

    Dear Visitors of Death Park,
    I see you children have accepted the challenge to free Disneyland from my clutches, but you must pass each level.
    I have given you each a power to complete the tasks, good luck!

    Luna Moon


    Now a group of teens stand, ready to take the challenge.

    Chapter One, Started on a High Level.
    Area: Aladdin's Palace
    Boss: Jasmine and Rah.
    Level: 3
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    The teens were all friends, and sighed.
    "Godamnit." Said the girl with the Carmel colored hair, her milk chocolate brown eyes looking around."What if we have to kill some of our favorite characters?"
    A girl with green eyes spoke up,"We deal with it, Harper."

    The boy wearing the black shades over his cinnamon red eyes snorted,"Diolanda, someone's going to be in tears."
    A girl with violet hair spoke up, playing with a spark of electricity as they inched towards the palace.
    "I dunno, that'll be really shitty though..."
    Another boy rolled his eyes,"Depends. We'll find out our type of opponent once we finish this first area I guess."
    A boy with hair much like Harper's chimed in,"Alex, that's actually a good prediction for once."

    Aaron flicked a piece of floating paint from his eyes, snorting,"Liam, we're going to die. Quit having your hopes an expectations so high."

    The girl named Diolanda rolled her eyes, opening the door to the palace building,"Winnie, see if there's booby traps.

    The redhead picked up a handful of sand, tossing it inside. An ass ton of booby traps going off, then a roar from the upper floor.
    "There's four floors of Aladdin's Palace." Alex said, entering and avoiding the broken booby traps that lay on the floor.

    Dave kicked some aside, rolling his eyes.
    All of a sudden, there was a thunder of stomping and roaring. Everyone froze.
    "What was that?"
    Harper shuddered,"Rah. Jasmine's tiger."

    Winnie bit her lip, watching as Dave slowly creeped up the stairs and returned back down.
    "Tequila."
    "What?" Snapped Lexi.
    Neveah pipped up,"In Mexico, they use tequila to kill scorpions because it would make it string themselves."
    Harper nodded in approval of this fact.

    Diolanda rolled her eyes, already looking around the room and finding a box.
    "Here it is! Everyone take a bottle, head upstairs with Dave and throw it. After, we'll listen." Diolanda said, starting to take the bottles out of the box.
    Harper, Dave, Liam, Lexi, Alex, Kaitlyn, Neveah, Winnie and Aaron sauntered upstairs, throwing the bottles and the tequila began working.
    The sizzle of the poison stinging the scorpions made Winnie shiver and kept walking.

    As they were about to continue, Dave put his foot on the first step of the flight of stairs leading to the next floor, when the familiar roar and pounding of paws rung above them on the third floor.
    "After this,"Harper began,"We have one area completed."

    Everyone nodded, as Dave began to speak, jaws dropped.
    "The next floor is nothing but sand, if we're slow enough, the floor will collapse beneath us. On five, we run upstairs."
    Dave counted, and sprinted up the stairs, taking Harper with them and they were all ready on the fourth floor. Winnie shuddered, knowing the thunder of paws and howls would begin.

    Everyone stood in a line, looking at Jasmine and Rah.
    "Well hello... How interesting of you teens to start on level 3." Jasmine said, stretching.
    "Level?" Alex asked, cocking his head.
    "Yes, there's levels.. I was the fourth part of Level Three. Or maybe third."
    The tiger beside her her growled as her chain whip slid across the tile as she slinked forwards towards the group.
    Aaron arched a paint eyebrow, and created a sword, and Liam stood up straight.
    Rah inched forward and Aaron through a spear of thinner at the tiger. He simply swatted it away.

    "Lexi, on three, shock Rah... His body is already lopsided, if you shock him, he'll be paralyzed...."
    Jasmine scowled, whipping her chain.
    "Scared?" She smirked.
    Diolanda smirked,"Not nearly, you cat lady."
    Jasmine whipped the chain at her, making Diolanda jump back and slightly tremble.
    Lexi took her chance and shocked the tiger, it's roaring and thundering howl echoed through Aladdin's palace.
    He fell, paralyzed. Jasmine walked next to her beloved partner, and put on a fake sad face mask.
    "Aw.. Now what was that"-
    Next was Liam, whom zipped with lightning speed and cracked the bat against her back, her falling over.
    She lay on the ground groaning in pain.
    "G-Gah..."
    "Give up?" Asked Dave, holding a spear to her head.
    She carefully nodded and stood up, holding up her hands.
    Rah disappeared in an orange glimmer.
    Everything was white around them, and Jasmine's figure was beginning to fade as she spoke.
    "In Disney, you need to collect a key from each area," she began, holding out the chain whip. "You've freed me from Luna Moon's control..."
    And those were her last words before shimmering away.

    With that said, the whip was in Diolanda's hands and they were back at the beginning of the park.
    They watched in awe as Aladdin's palace reformed into it's original cheery shape, and protected by a big, sky blue bubble. They smiled, seeing a freed princess in the window, waving good luck.

    Diolanda took the key off the whip, and placed it in her bag. As she dropped the whip, it became a turquoise rose.
    Area Complete.
     
  2. no Jack?!? And I'm in that one 
     
  3. Threw* but so far it's good :3
     
  4. Bro, I'm doing each area. You and Kaitlyn are off on your own.
     
  5. Only because I'm too lazy too walk
     
  6. Pfft.
    where was my mistake, Goddess? I have to print this later-
     
  7. Fighting the tiger, the guy "simply through his spear at him"
     
  8. Dammit-D:< Must correct on draft-
     
  9. Chapter two, One Eye Blind
    Area: Robin's Woods
    Boss: Maid Marian
    Level: 1
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    As they began to walk, Diolanda sighed.
    "Now we're actually starting on level one. Maid Marian doesn't have a partner, and doesn't use violence. She has riddles." Diolanda explained, marking off Aladdin's palace from the Disney map.
    Harper stretched, stopping at a forest, everyone stopping in a line.
    "We need to be quiet. Marian is swift, quiet and brilliant." Harper quietly explained.
    Everyone nodded, and just a few feet in, there was already a clearing. Along the circle clearing was cut down logs lining trees, and a tent. Everyone froze, upon hearing a twig snap.
    As Alex played with a ball of fire, a splash of water fell on his head, distinguishing the fire and his powers until he was dry.
    An arrow was fired, landing bedside Kaitlyn's foot. Lexi scowled, muttering,"How are you supposed to KILL her?"
    Another arrow was fired above her head.
    Marian jumped from the tree, flipping and landing gracefully.
    Aaron snorted,"So you want to play with bows and arrows, fox lady?"
    Marian barely turned her head, sitting down in the dancing grass.
    "I do riddles. You attempt to kill me, I will hurt someone." She said with a blank expression.
    "I'll solve the riddles," Kaitlyn volunteered.
    Lexi arched an eyebrow, but she hasn't seen anything bad yet.
    "If you fail to answer all three, she loses an eye." Marian said, pointing to Harper.
    Harper shook in fear.

    "First riddle," Marian began."It has four legs in the morning, two legs at noon and three in the evening. What am I?"
    Afraid of Kaitlyn messing up, Lexi and Kaitlyn said in unison,"A human."

    "Correct, next riddle."

    "I am always hungry, and need to be fed. If a finger touches me, I am red. What am I?"
    Kaitlyn answered with hesitation,"Fire."

    Marian nodded, but she wasn't going to get it.
    "Final riddle."
    Harper is sweating at this point.


    "You can break me, but I do not stop working. You can touch me, but I can be snared. You can lose me, but I do not matter. What am I?"
    "A heart?" Kaitlyn said, stating it more of a question. Marian stood, holding an arrow in a paw, slinking over to Harper.
    "Ah, but who's heart?"
    Marian growled, gripping Harper's wrist.

    "A young girl's heart or yours or mine..."
    "You must chose."

    And with that came the answer that was.....


    Wrong.
    "A girl's heart." Kaitlyn said with full confidence.
    "Wrong. You," Marian said pointing at Alex before she disappeared away from the clearing,"find the bandages. You'll need them..."
    And with that, the girl and fox woman disappeared.
    A panic started.
    "Shit! Lexi, get the bandages!" Alex nearly shouted, running into the forest to find a bloody arrow with a brown eye on it, a girl with a river of blood streaming out of her right eye socket, and a key.
    Alex pocketed the key, picking up Harper and cradling her.
    "Sh..It's okay..."
    Diolanda was preparing for when Alex came back with Harper so she could work on Harper's face.
    Liam stood next to Lexi, sighing.
    "Jesus, she was an... Odd opponent.." Lexi muttered.

    "N-No, it's not okay.." She whimpered in Alex's arms as he set her down in the grass. In silence, Diolanda began to make a gauze eye patch for Harper. Alex pressed his face into his hands, exhaling shakily.

    Lexi stood up, bursting into yells as she yelled at Kaitlyn.
    "Look Ms.Genius! Look where your 'brains' got us now!"
    "I-I got it right! Marian cheated!"
    Harper, having clean gauze over her left eye, still on her knees, she pointed behind her, signing as she spoke.
    "No! You didn't get it right! It's YOUR heart!..."

    And slowly it began to sink in.
    Marian only pierced her eye out, and out of no where, Harper began to panic in Alex's lap.
    "N-No! N-N-No, A-Alex, m-make the shadows go away"- she panicked, ducking her head.

    Diolanda turned her head from packing supplies, just to see Harper.

    He wrapped his arms around her, rocking her gently, whispering in her ear.
    "I promise it'll be okay, Harper.."
    She shook her head, her eye still widened,"Y-You can't promise I won't lose my other eye, you can't promise no one else won't get hurt... She's merciless..."

    "....Then I'll protect you with my life."
    Harper's heart beat was high, but she stopped squirming.
    Lexi rolled her eyes, running a hand through her hair.
    Liam finally pipped up.
    "The arrow messed her up. Give her a few hours, then she'll be out of shock and rebooted to having one eye."
    "So where to next?"
    "Mulan, level two."

    "....Shit, she was a good princess too..."

    Area complete
     
  10. This is a must read!
     
  11. This is really good
     
  12. ;D Glad you guys like if
     
  13. Poor Harper!
    And this is amazing.
     
  14. Loving this! Please let me know when u update by posting on my wall! Bump!!
     
  15. And then Jack saves the day! Please ladies, ladies… wait in line for autographs 