[She Will Be Mine]

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  1. My name is Tommy , the heir to the AK Hotel group , people have called me handsome and smart , and I have topped my school in academics and sports every single time without fail until she came….

    Recently a girl transferred into my class in summer , during my first year secondary school, her name was Vannessa , she was a plain and simple girl , and was of a petite build. She excelled in sports and academics , taking my spot as number that very semester too. I was pissed , being first in the school and never second , I decided to confront her.

    “Vannessa! You better watch out! I’m going to be you the next test!” I said, but she ignored me and walked away.

    “Is she mocking me?” I thought to myself , and the thought of it only pisses me off.

    The next day , I confronted her again, “ Vannessa! DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM? I’m the heir of the AK Hotel group!”

    “so? It does not show any of your ability by saying that only your family’s wealth.” She retorted

    She then turned her and back and walked away , I was stunned , no one has ever said that to me before. I went hope and decided to beat her on my own ability , I told my parents to cancel my tuitions and they were stunned but did so anyways as I was doing well academically.

    I hanged out with her from then on and she did not seem to despise my company.

    A week later , a few classmates and I were hanging out.
    “wow tommy! All the girls and over you and you’re smart too, I wish I could be just a little like you. ” said one of them , and they all agreed in unison .

    “but why cant I beat Vannessa? Do I lack in anyways?” I said
    “ whats so good about her?........” I agreed as they badmouthed her , I mean I hate her guts but as the badmouthing got worse I got pissed off and I started to defend her. They were stunned and I myself did not know why I did that too.

    I found out that Vannessa have not been going to the canteen to eat, and I found it worrying so I proceeded to find her , only to see her sitting on a bench near a tree , alone.

    “why are you sitting here alone? You brought your own food?“I asked.
    “this are leftovers from yesterday and I like being alone..” Vannessa reply .

    I then remember that Vannessa might have financial problems as she was only living with her mother.

    “hey would you like to eat with me in the canteen? My treat.” I offered.
    “can I really?” she said as her eyes lit up.

    And we walked to the canteen.

    As we were eating , I asked , “ do you have a mobile phone , so that I can asked you about some problems sums that I’m unsure about”

    “I don’t have one” she replied

    “WHAT? WHY?” I panicked

    “I don’t think that I would have the need to own one” vannessa replied.

    “ITS SO UNSAFE , I DON’T CARE , WE ARE GOING TO BUY ONE ON SATURDAY! I’M GOING TO WALK YOU HOME TODAY!”

    I then thought , wouldn’t it be considered a date since its just the two of us? I blushed.

    Vannessa did not reply and ate silently. As we walked home vannessa said that she wanted to buy groceries , and we did so.i offered to carry the bag of rice she bought , and I thought “ how was she able to carry this with ease?” and we finally reached her house.

    She invited me in , and I met her mother , Kathryn , she was a nurse and kept insisting for my number, and I gave it to her and we talked.

    “ thanks for being friends with my daughter , I was worried as she does not talk about school with me.” , “ she changed ever since her father passed away when she was young I’m glad that you could be her friend” said Kathryn.

    “I feel bad now , I treated her more like an enemy rather than a friend” I thought and went home.

    That Saturday, I brought her out to buy a handphone , and insisted that I pay for her , but as stubborn as she was she rejected my offer coldly. But that didn’t stop me I decided to bring her to the nearby café to eat some cakes which I paid for and exchanged phone numbers thereafter.

    Once again , she did not go to the canteen, I found again at the bench and approached her.

    “hey are you not eating?” I asked.

    “nope , I’m saving money for my cram school.” Vannessa responded.

    At that time her phone rang , Vannessa picked it up and her face turned gloomy.

    “what happened? You look pale….” I asked

    “my mom… she got into an accident and is now in the hospital..” her voice shaky , and face about to tear up..

    I grabbed her hand immediately and said “what are you waiting for lets go! Which hospital is she at?” I asked as we ran out of the school gates to flag down a taxi there. As we sat in the taxi , I held on to her shaky hands , it was smooth and small , I thought that by holding her hand it might have worked as her face seemed less anxious… as I looked at her face my heart skipped a beat , she was kind of cute…….

    As we reached the hospital , I brought Vannessa to her mother’s room only and it turns out she was fine , and the accident was not big as she only fracture her arm and leg. Vannessa walked me out and said

    “Thank you tommy , if you were not there I would have panicked and would still be a dazed”

    “its no biggie , you should go and see your mom , im going to go back home now “ I said blushing , little did I know that I have fallen for Vannessa…..

    [TO BE CONTINUED]

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    This was typed out in a rush , i hope you liked the content.... :/

    its a romance story which is targeted to touch the heart of the readers with a little comedy here and there :)

    leave some feedback , this is a more friendly for "kids" who should not be playing a game rated "17+"
     
  2. It really very heart warming stry...cnt wait to read more...