Okay I have been messing up a lot lately and it's been bugging me horribly so I'm going to start posting the rest of the story on here.
Chapter 1 I heard the scream as I ran, I didn't know where I was going really I just wanted to get away from the screaming. I paused to catch my breath because my heart was hammering in my chest making it feel like my heart was bursting out of my chest. After a while the screaming finally stopped and I barely heard the gurgling of them feeding on her. I thought that they were just a myth you know? Just some sick joke people made up to keep children from being out past curfew. But now I knew they were real and just as the myth said they were lusting creatures that lured you with their body and eyes. I stood up moved my hair from out of my eyes and continued on my way nervously listening to the sounds around me to be sure they didn't follow me.
After a bit the wind started to pick up and I shivered, was it from the cold or from something else? I shuddered and pulled my jacket closer to me as I tried not to run home, that would draw attention and that was something that I didn't need. As my two-story house came into view I grabbed my keys from my pocket and hurried up the stairs to unlock the door. As I walked in I shut the door quickly and leaned against the door and slid down bringing my knees up and resting my head on my knees and just stared at the floor. Was what happened real? Or am I in some nightmare that was the result of some show I watched before falling asleep? After a while I finally decided to get up off the floor and went to my phone to check my messages, after hearing the viocemail my friend Dolph left about the new club down the block.
I listened to Dolph's voice drone on about the new club and after a while I sighed and pressed the button smiling when it said that there was no more messages. I mean not that I wasn't enthusiastic about the new club it's just that I wanted to crawl in bed and sleep. After a couple of minutes of staring at the phone I decided against calling back and instead took my jacket off then shoes before walking to my room and plopping down on the bed not even bothering to change. I yawned and turned before finally falling asleep. I woke up about a quarter to four sweat dripping from my forehead as I try to catch my breath. I felt my wrist and neck to make sure that it wasn't real but just a **** up dream. After a bit my breathing finally slowed down enough but I couldn't go back to sleep. I got up and walked to the kitchen grabbing a glass from the cabinet then putting it in the sink as I watched the water pour into it. I turned the water of and turned leaning against the counter as I took a drink.
After a while the phone rang and I jumped dropping the glass cup and sighed when it shattered. What time is it anyway? It didn't feel early but then again my shutters are always closed. I sighed as the phone rang again and carefully without stepping on the broken glass when to the phone and picked it up before it rang for the third time. "H-hello?"I hesitantly said. " Dear your late do you know what time it is?"My boss Miranda Ice asked with a bit of annoyance in her tone. I sighed and rolled my eyes" No but I'm betting it's past lunch?" I asked not sure what time it really was. " Calla dear it's 11:30 your 30 minutes late for you conference meeting with rose" She said and laughed and I could just picture her in her office tapping her heeled foot on the plush carpet while she drank her iced latte. " Right I forgot I'll be there as soon as I can." I said and hung the phone up when I heard the click. I turned and got the dustpan from the closet and started to sweep the glass in a pile and empty it in the trash ben. After that I decided to make myself a pot of coffee, while the coffee was brewing I walked into my room got my tight black pencil skirt and my almost see through white shirt and went into the bathroom to take a shower.
After getting out of the shower I applied my vanilla and cinnamon lotion then body spray but i applied it lightly, didn't want to smell as if I was covering something up now would I? I wrapped a baby blue towel around me and a light green towel in my short all naturally curly black hair and walked out into my room. I put on favorite bra first and sighed with annoyance when i realized it was to small for me," I guess it's time to go up a size what do you think fancy?" I looked at my Siamese cat with curiosity and laughed when she jumped done and trotted out of the bedroom and into the kitchen to await her breakfast. I got dressed and put on my black and white stilettos heels and blow dryed my hair then put on some black eyeliner, liquid eye shadow and my favorite maybelline falsies. I walked to my kitchen and opened some canned cat food and emptied it in fancy's glass dish before I grabbed my purse and keys from the table and put on my jacket and grabbed my files for the new designs and a cup of coffee with french vanilla creamer and rushed out the door and down the steps pressing the atoumatic unlock botton for my Mercedes Benz and hopped in putting my keys in the engine and my files on the passenger seat and started the car and put it in drive before driving away.
I drove up the ramp and parked my car in the employee section and turned the engine off and grabbed my files before getting out and shutting the door locking it, I walked to toward the elevator and pressed the button and someone was there also I smiled politely and stood beside him and realized he was going to the same floor I was. Demetrius looked over at the girl and breathed in her scent of vanilla and cinnamon and licked his fangs feeling them sharpen, his clan didn't feed much since last night and that girl didn't last long and her blood wasn't as fulfilling as they had thought. He quickly recovered his thoughts before they got him into trouble it was daylight he couldn't do such things in the light, but later on her sweet intoxicating blood would be his to own... The elevator stopped and I smiled as the guy stepped out and continued down the hall as I got out and turned away and continued on my way sipping on my coffee as I went not knowing that the guy had stopped and turned to watch me. I got to the office and walked in sitting my stuff down as I was called into the conference room, I gathered up my files and coffee and went in. When I walked in all conversation had ceased and everyone was looking at me waiting for me start the conference. I sat my things down and gathered my files and passed them out to their designated owners and went and sat back down," as I was saying in our last meeting this new design is fabulous it's nothing we never created before and with your overview of the designs we can start creating and hiring models as soon as we can" I say with confidence after all this is my time to shine. Miranda nodded and went over the files," everything seems to be in order, and your right it's nothing none of my designers ever created I think we should go with it." After that all eyes turned toward the boss the one that says if it goes or stay, she had long and luscious red hair, piercing green eyes that could make a man crawl and beg and a fiery attitude to match.Rose sat there for a while looking over the files before finally looking and smiled" I love it deary why didn't you ever think of this before?" All I could do was nod as the meeting came to a close and we were all assigned to do certain things, me of course would be leading the group since after all I am the designer.
After what seemed like five days I finally decided it was time to pack up continue tomorrow. I go and get myself another cup of coffee and gather my files and walks to the elevator and presses the button before getting in and stands there as I listen to the elevator go down and to the employee parking lot and walks out unlocking the car and getting in and started the engine and drove home. Getting home I stopped by the Chinese restaurant and got some carry out before driving home and walking in the door not noticing it was unlocked. I set my stuff down then takes off my jacket then goes to my room and gets my night clothing and jumps in the shower. After getting out I go to change and I feel I breath on my neck and shivers go down my spine and I turn around and look at the guy that I seen on the elevator. Demetrius looked at the girl her hair wet and dripping and barely covered by a towel, he steps toward her and reaches out to run his finger along her neck and she jumped and backs up against the night stand gripping it trying to look for a weapon that wasn't there. He could take her now if he wanted, she didn't have anything to protect her and one small bite and she be done. But yet something about her intrigued him in no way a girl ever did but her... I stare at him waiting for him to lunge but he just reaches out and runs his finger along my neck I freeze and wince thinking this is it. But then I open my eyes when he runs his thumb along my cheek and goes in as if he was going to kiss me. I close my eyes waiting for his lips to touch my own but when I didn't feel them I open my eyes and look around he was gone no trace to where he went. Demetrius sat on top of the building that she lived in and looked at his hand. He could have easily kissed her and made her want him but yet for some reason he did not want to take her like she was some common prey. She was different he didn't know how or why but she was and he was willing to rush exposure to find the answers.
Demetrius sighed and hopped down from the building and continued on his way, he needed to feed so when he gets to taste her blood he won't risk draining her. He quickly finds his favorite spot to get his prey from and walks in spotting Melly and Eric he flashes his winning smile and goes over to sit with them."You okay? You look like you seen something that you can't have?" Melly asks and smirks her super sweet smile. Demetrius shakes his head and chuckles before looking at the hostess and orders a couple of drinks."What's up man?"Eric says and looks at the hostess and winks. He sigh when he see their fangs out, he guesses it's time to feed that was fine with him,"Let's go."He says with a authoritative voice and Melly and Eric get up their eyes sparking with a hint of mischief as they walk out. He walked out after them and stops to smell the air for their prey and licks his lips when he smells a petite blond girl. He signals Melly and Eric to their positions as he puts a suggestive thought in the girl's head and gets her to follow him. He pauses and opens his arms watching her walk right into his arms and he kisses her neck and she tilts her head letting him kiss her neck and he feels his fangs extend and sharpen before he sinks his fangs into her neck. She moans thinking the thought in her head is a very suggestive thought. Eric and Melly appear and the feed is on, we only take enough to fill our need before we use our saliva to heal her wounds. Demetrius makes a suggest thought for her to return home and forget everything that happened in the past twenty minutes.
Miranda watched from the building above and reported what was going on. Melly and Eric were fine yes but as she could tell Demetrius was getting closer to blood lust which wasn't good. She would have to confront him or fear exposure to the humans because as old as he his, he's getting less secretive and more open minded. After reporting to the higher ups she jumped well not really jumped more so created blocks and walked down them, she had another mission to fulfill. She had to meet with Danny since the higher ups were getting worried that he might get hungry and feed on someone in the open. She took out her file on Danny and skimmed over it sighing, she really disliked cases like these they always ended up in failure and that was something the higher ups didn't want. She hoped this time a half breed would surpass it's first decade of living.
Chapter 2 Calla woke up and looked around, was last night just a dream? Or did the guy of her dreams really show up in her house? She got up and got dressed and applied her makeup and fed Fancy before grabbing her keys and running out the door. She met Bridget and Dolph at the Starbucks and ordered a iced latte and a eclair before sitting with them,"How is the new design coming along?" Bridget asked in her quirky way of her's," it's coming along great should be out by later next month." I say with a sweet laugh,"That's good is that why you missed going with me to the club a couple nights ago?" Dolph asked with a slight pout and all I could was shake my head and take a sip of my latte. Could I tell them about my mysterious man?
Bridget and Dolph continued to stare at me like they knew something was up, I bit my lip at sat my drink down," Why are you two staring at my like that?" I retorted not trying to sound spiteful. Dolph frowned and bit her lip in a slight nervous gesture that usually meant something was wrong,"What's wrong Dolph? I didn't mean to upset you." I say trying to sound reassuring. Dolph shook her head,"Didn't you hear about the murder cases?" I looked at her with a blank expression and Bridget sighed taking a sip of her cappuccino,"She meant that the women who were being killed lately were from well to do families. And being Dolph she's worried something might happen to you deary I mean you do forget to lock your door."Dolph nodded in agreement and I sighed, there was no way in hell they'll hear about my mysterious man now," Most of the murders were in forests and alleyways not in houses so I'm fine." i said with reassurance but Dolph and Bridget just nodded doubt writing all over their faces. I got up glad to see the lunch crowd rush in," Yeah well I have to go to work see you next week." I say as I rush out the door and to my car accidentally bumping into Him. I look up blushing as he helps my stand and brushes off my clothing with ease," Sorry about bumping into you." ----------- Demetrius helps her up and brushes her clothes off," it's okay I kind of bumped into anyway," Smirks and chuckles before running his hand along her cheek silently regretting it, her pulse was like sweet intoxicating music to him and if he didn't go soon he wouldn't be able to resist taking her blood so he pulls his hand away as if it were on fire and turns walking away snarling to a cat that happened to be in his way. ----------- Calla blinks slowly trying to put everything together that just happened. First he bumps into her, next he's helping her up and running his hands over, then before she fully realized what was going on he suddenly walks away like he couldn't stand to be near her. And what made it worst she still didn't know his name and that was what bugged her the most.
As I continued to ponder about what happened between me and this mysterious guy that is always on I mind a horn honked and I realized where I was at. I sighed and shake my head i had no time to day dream i had a meeting with Miranda in....looks down at my phone and sighs, I had a meeting with Miranda right now meaning I'm late. I rush to my car and unlocks it before getting in and starting the car and driving off to work. I park the car in the employee parking lot and stops the car running to the elevator and pressing the button tapping my foot impatiently as it moves down. I sigh with relief as I get in and press the button for the top floor and leans against the elevator's wall humming softly as the elevator slowly goes up. It stops on the third floor and I sigh with annoyance until I see the elevator door open and my dear friend Melly gets in. I smile with relief and me and her embrace each other in a hug,"Melly wow I haven't seen you since well graduation and that was what? Six months ago?" I say smiling and giggling, Melly laughs and hugs me back,"Yeah I been so busy trying to get this job and now I have it meaning me and you can finally catch up on lost time."She says happily, I nod and agree before and when the elevator doors open we hug each other again and depart. I continue on my way to meet Miranda stopping shortly to say 'hello' to the secretary though I could never remember the poor girl's name. I go into the office and sigh when I see Miranda sitting on her desk her freshly manicured nails tapping on the furnished wooden table. I go and sit down at the table and realize sadly that I never got my files from the mysterious man. "I thought you would never show up dear. What took you so damned long?" Miranda asks and I go and explain to her what happened and winces when she grips the desk and gibes a deadly glare but then relaxes and nods like she understood. Did she?
It's a good story; but it's missing necessary punctuation. Also, the colors for the speaking is not necessary and if frankly confusing. Maybe instead of that you could put quotations and put he/ she said, with maybe a bit of add on....
Thanks for the advice ^_^; this is my first story really that was for fun and not for a assignment for school lol