I'll still keep writing Knight. > ---- Prologue ---- He was selfish. Always wanting more when he got what he wanted. Starting tantrums if he didn't get his way. What he wanted was a specific girl. That girl, with the same raven black hair he had. With emerald green eyes that pierced your soul, and a smile that would melt anyone's heart. Fortunately, nobody seemed to notice her but him. And that was what aroused him even more. She was his. His, his, his. Not anyone else's. Only his. But what would love a demon of the night? His beauty covered up his grotesque self. He was evil. Purely evil. Yet the women he manipulated paid no mind to that. But she? She avoided him, afraid. That was what he loved about her. It wasn't about appearances that mattered. It was about his personality. But old habits are hard to throw away. ---- "Go out with me." "N-no." His hand snaked behind her waist and pulled her closer to him, inhaling her scent. She smelled of hazelnut. He groaned, feeling his pants tightened as her soft body fused with his. His grip became tighter and the girl was too afraid to speak. Trembling in his grasp, she finally pushed him away. "N-no!" "... I'll pay you for your services." That was the last straw. A slap to the face was what he got, a red bruise forming on his cheek. Storming out of the room in tears was the last he saw of her. ---- Money. Of course. At the age of 14, he already knew how to unclasp women's bras with the swift motion of his fingers. He gave up his virginity to a girl from middle school, and that same girl wanted to be with him. He refused. The next day, she was never seen from ever again. But that didn't matter. Flirting came to him naturally, and women fell into his arms just with him whispering sweet words. He never meant them. They were just his toys, used to release his stress. Once he was done with them he'd throw them out the door, even if they were half naked. Sometimes in the middle of their kissing sessions, if he wasn't aroused, he didn't need them. He never even enjoyed the sex, really. It was the thought of breaking them that brought him joy. And it was pain that he wanted. The feeling of regret and a moment of oblivion, once the poundings on his door ended. He'd lay on the couch, too indulged in his own misery to care. Swimming in his own guilt and thoughts. But they never helped. It was that moment where he could be alone in his head that he wanted the most. Although, lately, all he could ever think about was her. ---- Do you want this to be a teacher/student story or just a plain romance? .-.
Bump stands for Bring Up My Post. I'm not ungrateful, but really? I'm not bragging, but my story's on the first page. I'd like some feedback. Prove to me you're actually not skimming but reading. Check the bottom of my post to find out. =_=
Exactly what Qin said. NORMAL. THE PLOT IS TOO GOOD TO BE RUINED WITH ANOTHER TEACHER/STUDENT PLOT. .__.
I think just plain romance, you have too much of a good idea to make it a student-teacher relationship! But hey it's your opinion that counts
I think it should be regular romance. It would be more realistic that way i think. I am so happy that you have two stories right now, so i have two things to look forward to! I just wanted to say that your writing is one of the most mature styles on here, and that's amazing considering you are only my age (6th grade)
I think it should be regular romance. It would be more realistic that way i think. I am so happy that you have two stories right now, so i have two things to look forward to! I just wanted to say that your writing is one of the most mature styles on here, and that's amazing considering you are only my age (6th grade)
Whoa.. This is intense. I really think maybe it should be just a regular romance, but continue! The rich writing is so entertaining to read =]
Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad I'm attracting readers. Today I PROMISE, and I MEAN PROMISE, CHERRY FUCKING WHIPPED CREAM ON TOP PROMISE, that I will give you a helluva long update for both Selfish and Knight! Well, 100% definitely for Knight, if I'm packing today I'll make a medium-length update, but still long nonetheless. Gozaimasu!