Seeking REDONE

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Adele-QueenOfBread, Oct 27, 2011.

  1. Oh,Sorry For The Bad Use Of Grammar I Re Did The Story Sorry, . Seeking. .
    I Woke Up Stranded,Lost, Where Was I? ..In An Forest. I Tried To Get Up But Something Held Me Down, . Finally I Got Up I Wandered The Forest Seeking. For Someone Something. The Wind Blowed The Forest Lifeless. I Kept Walking,I I Walked For Hours. Finally I Found An House. . .A Old Lady Came Out Shouting,"Bob Bob Look Theres An Child Outside". I Looked At Them, My Clothes Torn,Ripped,I Looked Like An Mess. The People Took My Hand,And Than I Fainted >Do Not Comment If It's Bad My Phone Is Kinda Messed Up So The Grammar And Writing Might Mess Up,
     
  2. OMG It Didn't Work Pls Forgot And let Die Cells Messed Up So It Didn't Work I iGNORE PLS