"why are you keeping all these secrets from me?! " yelled Ashley while tears are streaming down her cheek." Ash, I wanna keep my secrets, secrets...." Dynn responded. " Fine, just forget it! " screamed Ashley stomping away.
Start new paragraphs when you change talkers. It'll make it a little more organized and you won't have to use the he said she said thing as often.
As Dynn was walking to school the next day a whiff of forever sunshine perfume zoomed past her. " Wait, Ashley! Come back!" Hollered Dynn. Ashley ignored her, and Dynn couldn't catch up because she was almost 30 feet ahead of her. Ashley
Ashley was glad she was in cross country, or else she wouldn't have been able to run that far. She was sure that she was at least 30 feet ahead of Dynn but she looked back just in case. She stumbled and fell on top of Charlie. Ashley liked Charlie, not only because he is a jock but also because he is the hottest guy in school. " Ow, that hurt." howled Charlie. " I'm so sorry!" Ashley said. Charlie just nodded and walked away. Great now he must hate me Ashley thought. Ashley walked into the hall, clutching her biology book waiting for the humiliation to come...
Dynn didn't know why Ashley was so mad..... Well she did it was because she wouldn't tell Ashley her secret. It was a family secret, and it should be kept a secret. Dynn saw Ashley fall onto Charlie, and she knew Ashley likes him. It's completely obvious, Ashley doesn't know that she knows... Dynn looked at her phone, 8:30. Dynn ran the rest of the way to school. She knew that Ashley would be humiliated when Charlie tells everyone. Dynn put away her phone and ran to class.
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