SECRETS

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Allison_DiLaurentis (01), Aug 14, 2011.

  1. So I decided to write another story. Because. Yes. I am crazy. Read and tell me what you think:)



    "no stop. He is going to catch us."

    "Noah. Stop."

    "Ryan its okay. I won't let him find out. Okay?

    "Noah." I said between kisses.

    He just kissed back harder not wanting me to let go.

    For two months I have been sneaking arround with my best friends brother.

    My best friend, Mason and I have been best friends since we where three. We grew up together and I had always thought of Noah as Mason's hot older brother but recently I had been thinking more of him. I loved the feeling of sneaking arround. But I knew that if mason ever found out. He would be hurt.

    It's not like I liked lying to him. I didnt. I hated it. But I was falling for Noah. And he was into me.

    (yes. Ryan is a girl. And her best friend mason is a guy. Noah is masons older brother)
     
  2. Hey if anyone is reading this I need more characters I will put a new sign up forum on in a few min. Thx!!:)
     
  3. It's awesome  tell me wen u post more and can i be a character ??
     
  4. I am about to post more. And yeah u can. Just post your character bio I the secrets character sign ups
     
  5. I really want to be in this 
     
  6. It's good!! I signed up too  I really love the plot line. Although I'm all too familiar with it ._. But it's a really good story line!
     
  7. @pixie: your in!!
    Kay: thanks! And sorry the story I was writing was way more popular in story line so this one is a little less used. I don't think it is going to end up like others but if it does start to sound like something else you have read. Tell me! Thanks!!:)
     
  8. Lol oh no. It's an amazing story line. I meant that in that fact that I PERSONALLY have gone through this. Not as a story.  Please update soon and I hope to be in it as well!
     
  9. Great! Can't wait! 
     
  10. Oh well I will be updating soon and if I need help writing I will defiantly go to you!
     
  11. I'm here to help! 
     
  12. I like this. Alot. Keep going 
     
  13. Before I could protest noah kissed
    Me. I hesitated before finally I melted giving in and kissed him back.

    When we finally broke our kiss to breathe. We didn't move far apart. If we spoke our lips would brush against eachothers.

    "we need to stop. Mason is going to catch us. I don't want to hurt him."

    "shhhhh" he quietly said as he planted a small kiss on my lips. "it's okay. Mason isn't going to find out. I have got everything under control."

    He kept on kissing me. Sweet slow little kisses.


    I fell asleep in his arms. When I woke up I freaked out. Noah was already up.

    "damn Ryan."

    "what?! What happened?!"

    "even when you sleep your still amazingly beautiful."

    I blushed "thanks"

    He stood up and came over to his bed where I was. And softly kissed me. "well you are." he said between kisses

    We ended up making out until I had woken up enough to realize that mason could walk in at any minute.

    I pulled away.
    "what's wrong baby doll?"

    "mason could walk I any minute"

    He sighed in agreement. He walked in. And signaled all clear to come out.

    "mason is downstairs making breakfast."

    I ran down the stairs quietly running into mason on the way down.
    Crap. Hell. Damn it. I thought.

    "wait. What are you doing here. I thought you where going to come over in an hour."

    "I was I was but I came over early. I needed help with my algebra homework and since Noah has already taken it I thought what the he'll. Why not.
     
  14. This story rocks!
     
  15. Hey good job. Umm am I in? I signed up..
     
  16. Awesome! More? Now :3
     
  17. More more more